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Another day, another Chlark update. :-)

Some more from Crisis, in which we finally get a post-incident Chlark confrontation.

Enjoy.  Feeback = Lurve. :-)

New Banner.  Weepy!Clark.  Hope y'all like.

Title:              Crisis

Author:          BabyDee
Pairing:          Chlark/Kaloe

Rating:           NC-17 (this chapter PG-13)

Warnings:     Graphic sex, non-con/rape, angst.  Kal isn’t going to come off very nice in this story (see the warnings), so if you’re a fan of his, you might want to look away now.

Timeline:      Season 2-3 (Exodus – Exile; Clark’s RedK Summer)

Disclaimer:   All characters belong to the CW & DC comics. 

Summary:     A violent encounter between Chloe and Clark threatens to destroy their friendship forever.

Feedback:      …is much appreciated. J

 

 

Read previous chapter here.

Read story from the beginning here.

 

 

 Chapter 7


“…so then Timothy Blake walks in and tries to strong-arm-slash-drag me out of the place, but they hadn’t counted on the stealthy movements of The Ross,” Pete finished dramatically, his eyes alight with mischief as he regaled Chloe with tales of his holidays in Wichita.  “That martial arts course came in useful, I tell ya.”

 

Chloe smiled indulgently.  “Maybe I should start thinking about taking some classes myself,” she mused as she prepared the layout for the Torch’s next issue. 

 

“You should.  The instructor said that girls need self-defence classes even more than boys do.  That way, you feeble females can fend off creepy perverts in dark alleys when they get too handsy.” 

 

Chloe swallowed and turned away as Pete chuckled loudly at what he probably thought was a joke.  She concentrated on fitting the article headers on the master document, trying vainly not to focus on the terrifying images his words had conjured up in her head.

 

“What, no snappy retort?” she heard him say.

 

She blinked and snapped her head up.  “Huh?”

 

He shook his head and laughed.  “I’ve just sat here and made at least twenty anti-feminist statements, and you’ve let me off the hook for every single one of them,” he observed.  “Definitely not your usual m.o.  What’s on your mind, baby girl?”

 

She shrugged and smiled.  “I’m just a little tired, is all.”

 

“You’re working too hard, that’s what it is,” he admonished, jumping down from the desk and walking towards her.  “The Torch is criminally understaffed, but you refuse to interview anyone for writing gigs here.”

 

“That’s because I’ve seen the way they all spell, and believe me, not one of them holds a smidgeon of promise,” she retorted, handing him the next layout.  “That’s why I’m thrilled I have you, Pete.  At least you know your way around a pen, paper and thesaurus.”

 

“Har-har,” he said dryly as she turned and walked to the supply cupboard.  “Remind me why I work here again?”

 

“Because you can’t get enough of my dry wit and sparkling personality?” she said lightly as she brought down a box of ring-binders, her back still turned to him as he frowned. 

 

“Actually, I could be wrong, but your sparkle seems to have lost its shine recently,” he observed.  “You want to go into town with me later, so we can talk?  There’s a new movie showing at the Talon Theatre, we could - Clark!” he exclaimed suddenly.  “You’re back!  Hey, man, it’s been waaaaay too quiet here without you!” 

 

Chloe froze in the act of shifting a box of staples and started trembling so hard her hands shook violently.  Both the box of ring binders and the staplers slipped from her nervous fingers and landed on the floor with a thud as rows and rows of staples and ring-binders clattered noisily along the floor.

 

After much back-slapping and man-hugging, Pete turned his attention back to her.  “Hey, Chloe – look who just walked in!” he said excitedly. 

 

Chloe swallowed hard as two sets of footsteps approached.  Quickly she bent to the floor and started gathering the fallen items into their respective containers, her heart thumping loudly as a familiar pair of well-worn workboots appeared in front of her. 

 

“Let me help you with that,” he offered softly, and began to crouch down to her level.

 

“I got it,” she interrupted as she hastily got to her feet, leaving a row of scattered staples on the floor.  “I have to dash, Pete.  I’ll be back in a minute.”

 

Pete blinked at her , puzzled.  “But I thought we were gonna-?”

 

Quickly she thrust the items into his hands and walked unsteadily towards the exit.  As soon as she stepped out the Torch door she speed-walked round the corner and broke into a run down the corridor. 

 

“Hey, no running in the school halls, Sullivan!” the hall monitor whined as she sped past. 

 

The warning fell on deaf ears as she fled at top speed until she’d reached the safety of the girl’s locker room.  As soon as she spied the first empty stall she barricaded herself in and locked the door, breathing heavily as her hand tightened on the doorknob.

 

Oh God, he was back. 

 

Clark was back.

 

Her hands trembled and she started to hyperventilate as panic crept in.  Fiercely, she took deep breaths to try and force her heart rate back to normal, and focus.

 

Okay, so Clark was back.  Daddy Kent must have found a way to get through to his son, because from all indications the city attitude had been checked in at city limits.  But she wasn’t ready to face him, not yet.  Having him suddenly show up like that had knocked the wind out of her sails, and she’d needed to get as far away from him as possible so she could gather her scattered wits together.

 

Her jaw tightened as her hand moved to one of the many pockets on her combat trousers.  The item in the pocket sat solidly against her thigh, almost reassuring.  The effect was almost instantaneous, as her breathing slowed and her heart began to beat at a more normal pace.

 

Chloe sat on the commode closed her eyes as she wrapped her hands around her knees and waited.  It was two hours till the end of the school day.  She would venture back out when the final bell rang. 

 

***

 

“Where did you disappear to?” Pete queried when he walked into the torch after hours.  “One minute you were placing headlines, and then the next you’d gone ‘poof’.  Not to mention that you skipped a double Geography session.”

 

“I had some homework to hand in,” she lied.  “Today was the deadline.”

 

Pete frowned.  “Really?  What class was that?”

 

“It’s extra credit.”  She studied the headlines board and blinked.  “Wow.  Did you finish all this off singlehandedly?”

 

“No, Clark did,” he replied.  “I just kept him company and entertained him with Tales from Wichita.  Mind you, he was awfully quiet for some reason.  God knows what he faced when he ran away, but from all indications, it wasn’t pretty.”  

 

“Well, he’s back now, so that’s that,” she said flippantly as she signed into her computer.  Big mistake; Pete immediately picked up on her change of mood.

 

“Have you spoken to him since he got back?” he asked curiously.

 

Her shoulders stiffened.  “No,” she answered shortly.

 

“What about before he left?” he persisted.  “When was the last time you saw him?”

 

“Oh, darn.  Pete, could you do me a favour and get me some candy from the machine, please?” she said, pasting a smile on her face.  “I have a ten-dollar bill, but it only takes quarters and dimes.”

 

Thankfully he didn’t seem to notice her blatant deflection.  “One Hershey Bar for her Ladyship coming right up,” he smiled, reaching out to chuck her chin lightly before bouncing out the door.  “I could always give you Kisses, though…”

 

Chloe sighed and returned to her boards.  She really didn’t feel like talking tonight, and Pete just wasn’t getting the message.  By the time he got back, she’d have stuck her headphones in her ears; maybe then he’d get it and leave her in peace.

 

But all too soon, she heard footsteps returning to the Torch.  Sighing, she gave a resigned smile and slowly turned.  “If you got me Hersheys Kisses instead of the standard bar, Pete Ross, so help me, I’ll…” 

 

She trailed off, immobilised at the sight of Clark in the doorway.  She hadn’t really gotten to see him earlier; he was wearing his usual blue t-shirt under a red jacket, and his hair was properly combed.  He looked very much like his old self, and, she had to admit, very repentant.

 

“Hi Chloe,” he said softly.  “Can we talk?” 

 

Fear and rage bubbled up in her and she clenched her fists in anger.

 

“No,” she spat.  “Get out.”

 

***

 

Chapter 8

 

 


Date: 2010-08-23 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marikology.livejournal.com
Hmm. At first I was thinking that if Clark told her his secret as an explanation, not an excuse, it'd be okay, but now I think that even if he does, Chloe and Gabe should press charges. It's bigger than an "I'm sorry." This chapter was way too short. Want more.

Date: 2010-08-23 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"This chapter was way too short. Want more."

Hee! Demanding little madam, aren't you? :-D

There is more, but I have to edit it first. I can have it up in about an hour, if you're lucky...assuming I don't fall asleep by then. It's almost 3am here. :-/

Glad you like, babes! :-)
Edited Date: 2010-08-24 10:15 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-08-23 02:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phantom-queen.livejournal.com
Hmm. At first I was thinking that if Clark told her his secret as an explanation, not an excuse, it'd be okay, but now I think that even if he does, Chloe and Gabe should press charges. It's bigger than an "I'm sorry." This chapter was way too short. Want more.

I can't tell if it's just because I'm bitter or the type of person I am but I totally agree with you. This is just so major. I usually don't read rape fics because I have a hard time accepting that it can ever be OK.

I don't care if it's Red-K Clark or Souless Angel it just doesn't work for me.

That being said I'm sticking with this story because I want to see where Dee takes it.

Date: 2010-08-23 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"I can't tell if it's just because I'm bitter or the type of person I am but I totally agree with you. This is just so major. I usually don't read rape fics because I have a hard time accepting that it can ever be OK."

*points upward* Exactly that. So I'm having a hell of a time with this fic, as you can well imagine. I have it all mapped out, but at the same time it has to remain realistic, so...challenges, challenges. :-)

" don't care if it's Red-K Clark or Souless Angel it just doesn't work for me.

That being said I'm sticking with this story because I want to see where Dee takes it."


I'm so honoured that you trust me enough to read it, and stick with it! Thank you, babes! :-)

*furiously edits Chapter 8*

Date: 2010-08-23 01:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitmerlot1213.livejournal.com
This was just lovely!

Chloe's panic attack at Clark's presence was spot on, and I don't blame her for running from him, but now he's back in the room and wanting to talk to her.

I have a feeling she has some Kryptonite in her pocket--is she going to use it on him?

Continued wonderful work on this story.

Date: 2010-08-23 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"This was just lovely!"

Thanks, Kathy! :-)

"Chloe's panic attack at Clark's presence was spot on, and I don't blame her for running from him, but now he's back in the room and wanting to talk to her."

Well, he couldn't run away forever... :-/

"I have a feeling she has some Kryptonite in her pocket--is she going to use it on him?"

I can guarantee that whatever's in her pocket will definitely be used on him. You'll just have to wait to see what it is. ;-)

Thanks for commenting, sweetie!

Date: 2010-08-23 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chloista4ever.livejournal.com
Awesome update Dee, Poor Chloe :( it's heartbreaking what has happened to her and what's to come with her and Clark. I can't wait for you next update Dee.

Date: 2010-08-23 02:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Thanks, Ana! I'm tidying up the next chapter as we speak; it should be posted in the next 20 minutes.

Glad you like it! :-)

Date: 2010-08-23 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] abarbiestory.livejournal.com
....that was really really a nice update! the way you explained chloe's panic attack was like watching it live, i had tears in my eyes becuase i started to feel her pain. I can't wait for more, especially if she actually lets him talk to her!

Date: 2010-08-23 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Thanks for your awesome comments! I'll post the next chapter soon.

PS: Your icon always moves me. That's not indicative of your current situation, is it? :-/

Date: 2010-08-23 04:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] abarbiestory.livejournal.com
thanks, but thankfully my icon is not a reflection on my current situation/ lifestyle or anything else. One day a few months ago I took the day to take pictures. The entire day was just dedicated to trying to see the beauty in every single thing in Seattle. I was by my University when I saw that sign and it kindda broke my heart so i decided to add that to my photography. But thanks for the kind words

p.s. Totally looking forward to the update :)

Date: 2010-08-23 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rjchasez.livejournal.com
Ohhh, dammmn! I hadn't read any of this yet, but randomly decided I should. And I'm glad. I'm intrigued to find out what happens here. I'm so conflicted... what Clark did is absolutely unforgivable, but at the same time, I cannot help but feel sorry for him. So far, this has made for an awesome story.

And right now I'm totally head/desking because I just realized I'm now probably the only Chlark fanfic writer who hasn't got a Red K!Summer fic. FAAAAIL. One of my fics is kind of similar to this one in nature... but it's set after Crimson instead of during the Red K!Summer. Hrm. I need to finish that trilogy. It's been too damn long.

ETA: If you need someone to help you with some evol plot bunnies for this... my bad/wrong self has a few... *shifty eyes*
Edited Date: 2010-08-23 02:50 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-08-23 02:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Ohhh, dammmn! I hadn't read any of this yet, but randomly decided I should. And I'm glad. I'm intrigued to find out what happens here. I'm so conflicted... what Clark did is absolutely unforgivable, but at the same time, I cannot help but feel sorry for him. So far, this has made for an awesome story."

Thanks, Becky! For such a tough story, I'm so pleased with the comments I've received.

"And right now I'm totally head/desking because I just realized I'm now probably the only Chlark fanfic writer who hasn't got a Red K!Summer fic. FAAAAIL. One of my fics is kind of similar to this one in nature... but it's set after Crimson instead of during the Red K!Summer. Hrm. I need to finish that trilogy. It's been too damn long."

Yes, yes, get writing! We need more Chlark fic out there, all the fabulous Chlark writers have disappeared! :-(

"ETA: If you need someone to help you with some evol plot bunnies for this... my bad/wrong self has a few... *shifty eyes*"

I love evol plot bunnies! *shifty eyes with you* ;-) As you can see, though, this story is very slow-moving because it hurts me to write it. I think I've about maxed out all the nasty in this story, but I'd love to toss about ideas for other Chlark/Kaloe stories! :-)

Date: 2010-08-23 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rjchasez.livejournal.com
I need an idea... I don't think I've ever had one... no, wait, I have, but that was for a series I'm no longer writing. :\

I can understand your pain there. It's been almost three years since I wrote Addicted, and I just haven't found myself in the right mindspace to write the sequel, which is... probably gonna be even more twisted than the original, just minus the... sexual aspect of it. The evol plot bunny I had for you... not exactly nasty, but it's pretty messed up. I'm mean that way. I tend to abuse my muses, if Addicted is any indication. :\

Date: 2010-08-23 03:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Ooh, nice icon!

Could I have a link for Addicted, please? :-P

Thanks!

Date: 2010-08-23 03:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rjchasez.livejournal.com
Thank you. Made it myself. :D

Of course! http://rjchasez.livejournal.com/319390.html

Date: 2010-08-24 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Whoa. Fantastic story there, babes! :-D

Date: 2010-08-23 03:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iluvaqt.livejournal.com
The reactions and thoughts you conveyed in this were brilliant. I was transported back in time and I saw each scene and line played out in vivid detail. Including Pete and his charming nature. Oh please bring him back for a cameo in S10!! He's gotta be in Homecoming. If we can't have Chloe, and we please at least have Clark and Pete hanging out in the Torch reminiscing!!

So shy of the oh big 'apology talk' but I know you'll deliver.

Date: 2010-08-23 03:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"The reactions and thoughts you conveyed in this were brilliant. I was transported back in time and I saw each scene and line played out in vivid detail. Including Pete and his charming nature. Oh please bring him back for a cameo in S10!! He's gotta be in Homecoming. If we can't have Chloe, and we please at least have Clark and Pete hanging out in the Torch reminiscing!!"

You mean you're still watching?!? LOL!!! :-D

"So shy of the oh big 'apology talk' but I know you'll deliver."

Well...you get *some* of it in the next chapter, but I still signed off on an Evil Cliffie, which is kind of par for the course for me. But you still love, me doncha? *puppy dog eyes*

Glad you like, hun! :-)

Date: 2010-08-23 04:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iluvaqt.livejournal.com
'course I'm still watching, I'm a glutton for punishment. It's in my nature. But of course Justin's still a regular and I love him to pieces he's so charming and fun. Oh and all the cameos are making me giddy. Both Johns and James Masters. Seriously, they get Sam (Pete) for Homecoming and I just might be able to watch it without crying over no Chloe. :I

And I love you Dee. Even when you make Clark do dreadful things, or you make him think-headed (oh wait, he was born that way)... I thought Kryptonians were supposed to have superior intellect? Maybe all that kryptonite exposure growing up irrevocably damaged him.


Date: 2010-08-23 10:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"'course I'm still watching, I'm a glutton for punishment. It's in my nature. But of course Justin's still a regular and I love him to pieces he's so charming and fun. Oh and all the cameos are making me giddy. Both Johns and James Masters. Seriously, they get Sam (Pete) for Homecoming and I just might be able to watch it without crying over no Chloe. :|"

Personally I am more than a little amused that it takes a myriad guest stars - most of whose characters are already dead & buried on the show - for Brian & Kelly to even attempt to fill AM's shoes. ;-)

"And I love you Dee. Even when you make Clark do dreadful things, or you make him think-headed (oh wait, he was born that way)..."

*snort* And there goes my tea all over my keyboard!!! :-D

"I thought Kryptonians were supposed to have superior intellect?"

Clearly that's a myth, seeing as they're all extinct or living in orbs and bottles. They may come to earth and spout all sorts of elitist, condescending shit, but at the end of the day, we never blew up our own planet. So there! :-D

"Maybe all that kryptonite exposure growing up irrevocably damaged him."

*thinks*...Nah. They're all stoopid. ;-)

Thanks for your glowing praise, babes. :-)

Date: 2010-08-23 06:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] svchlollie.livejournal.com
great chapter chloe need a visit from the cousin!

Date: 2010-08-23 10:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Oh, this is set in Season 3, babes, so the cousin will not be making an appearance. I'm having a hard enough time writing Chloe and Clark out of this mess without throwing an additional character into the mix!

Glad you like it, though. :-)
Edited Date: 2010-08-23 10:47 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-08-23 08:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grlmonday.livejournal.com
My heart's pounding. Oh, poor Chloe! My God, I couldn't imagine being in her shoes right now!

Date: 2010-08-23 03:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
My sentiments exactly. Poor Chloe. :-(

Let's see how it all plays out, shall we?

Thanks again, babes!

Date: 2010-08-23 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pompeypearly-v2.livejournal.com
poor Chloe! So scared of that BDA she had to hide in the toilets. Can't blame her for wanting him out of her sight.

great chapter hun

Date: 2010-08-24 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Thanks, Pompey! Glad you like it. :-)

Date: 2010-08-24 12:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] simi24.livejournal.com
Poor Chloe!
off to read ch. 8

Date: 2010-08-24 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Poor Chloe indeed. Poor Clark, for that matter. :-(

Date: 2010-08-24 08:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jacques21.livejournal.com
Another great update.
God Dee how is it possible that you made me love and hate this story so much.
Oh man big Chlark convo coming up. I'm so freaking nervous.
Off to read the next chapter.

Date: 2010-08-25 12:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Another great update."

Thank you, hun! :-)

"God Dee how is it possible that you made me love and hate this story so much."

Hee! No easy feat, but that is the desired result, so just run with it! :-D

"Oh man big Chlark convo coming up. I'm so freaking nervous."

Oh, me too, babes. Me too. :-/

Glad you like this chapter, hope you like the next!

Date: 2010-08-26 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mari2anne.livejournal.com
/[QUOTE]:
"New Banner. Weepy!Clark. Hope y'all like."
[QUOTE]\

That banner is absolutely perfect.

And this update was so powerful in the way you're leading up to Chloe facing that she will eventually run into Clark... and brave as she is, she was just not ready.

Very, very realistically written.

Date: 2010-09-03 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternal-moonie.livejournal.com
What an AWESOME chapter and banner! *hugs*

Date: 2011-04-11 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ellyfanfiction.livejournal.com
You tell 'im, Chloe!

Seriously-- good writing. I wouldn't expect her to listen calmly to anything he has to say. She has every right to be angry.

Date: 2013-06-12 02:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hellzz-on-earth.livejournal.com
Really Clark you thought it was going to be that easy?

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