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So finally, Misdirection comes to a close.  And I know alot some of you will want to pelt me with rotten eggs and squishy tomatoes by the time you're done, but believe when I say there is a method to my madness, and I WILL get these two together...eventually. 

So...here ya go, final chapter.  Enjoy!

Lots of love & hugs to [livejournal.com profile] kc_2009 , who gifted me with this wonderful, wonderful banner.  Thanks a million, Claudia.  Love ya, babes! *smishes you*



Title:              Misdirection

Author:          BabyDee
Pairing:          Chlollie

Rating:           R (this chapter PG13)

Warnings:     None

Timeline:      Season 7 (Siren) with references to Season 6’s Justice

Disclaimer:   All characters belong to the CW & DC comics. 

Summary:     Sparks begin to fly between our high-achieving couple.  Sequel to Trajectory.

Feedback:      …is lurrrrve. :-)

 


Read previous chapter here.
Read story from the beginning here
 

 

Chapter 11

 

 

Oliver stood on his balcony in the early morning sunlight, his mind on the events of the previous day.  Another showdown with his nemesis, Lex Luthor, only this time, Lady Fishnet aka Dinah Lance, or the Black Canary as Clark had dubbed her, had gotten involved in the fracas.  Thankfully she’d seen the truth of his words and realised that Lex wasn’t as innocent as he’d made himself out to be when she’d signed on for his services, and by the time Lex whipped out two pistols and opened fire on them, any lingering doubts she may have had rapidly dissipated.  If not for Clark’s timely intervention, both he and Dinah might have lost their lives.

 

He smiled grimly to himself.  Clark may be a self righteous git with tunnel vision most of the time, but when the chips were down, he always came through for his friends.  He’d been instrumental in getting Dinah to see what Lex was really like, as well.

 

Sighing, Oliver walked back into the apartment and bent to retrieve the framed family photo of him and his parents which had gotten broken in yesterday’s skirmish.  As he placed it back on the desk, he heard the elevator arrive and turned to see Lois opening the grate.

 

“Oliver,” she greeted.  “Slash-Green Arrow…or are there any other hyphenates that I need to know about?”

 

He smiled at his former girlfriend.  “No, that’s pretty much the biggie.  I’m sorry, Lois.  I never meant to hide who I was from you, I just…”

 

“No…it’s okay,” she said, holding up a hand.  “I get it, you were just trying to protect me.  And I’ve got to say, it clears up a lot.  It never did make sense how you could blow off a hottie like me.”

 

He chuckled, and then his face turned serious.  “Listen, Lois…whole we’re on the subject…” 

 

She put her hands over his.  “Oliver – let me stop you there.  I know what you want to say…”

 

His eyes widened.  “You do?” 

 

She nodded.  “Chloe and I talked yesterday, and –”

 

His eyes widened even further.  “You’ve spoken to Chloe?  She told you about…”

 

“About the little thing you have going, yes,” she said. 

 

He let out a relieved sigh, thankful that Lois was in the know about him and Chloe at last.  “You’re taking it remarkably well, all things considered.  I’d half-expected you to slug me again.”

 

“Don’t be silly, there’s no reason for that,” she said, scoffing.  “I’m not jealous at all; well, maybe a little.”

 

“Given your reaction yesterday, I’m just pleased you’re not tossing me off the balcony, and scratching Chloe’s eyes out,” he laughed.  “We were so worried about how you would take it.” 

 

Lois waved a hand dismissively.  “Oh, I don’t blame you for confiding in her.  Chloe’s the family member who keeps all the secrets; I’m the blabbermouth that leaks them all out.” 

 

A frown furrowed his brow.  “Confiding in her?” he echoed. 

 

“It’s just made me understand that I can never be trusted to keep a secret like yours.” 

 

“My secret?” he parroted again.

 

“You know me and my big mouth, Ollie.  Sooner or later, I’d slip up, and if we were back together, I’d end up compromising you by calling you the wrong name at the wrong time...”

 

Quickly he held up his hands.  “Hang on, Lois, back up a little.  You’re going to fast for me.  What are you talking about?”

 

She sighed.  “I’m not blind, Oliver,” she said sadly.  “The romantic dinner, your state of semi-nudity at my arrival…I know you wanted us to get back together yesterday, and believe me, there’s nothing that would bring me greater joy…but I can’t.” 

 

He stared at her, perplexed.  It was like they were having two different conversations.  From what he could surmise, Chloe hadn’t told her about them getting intimate; she’d simply acknowledged that she’d been in on his secret identity.

 

“Maybe I’m selfish here,” Lois went on tearfully, “but I don’t want to wonder where you are every night.  I can’t share you with the rest of the world, Ollie, and I definitely suck at the whole dual identity thing.”

 

He stared speechlessly, blinking as she lifted his hands to her lips and kissed them.

 

“I can’t be with you, Oliver,” she said sadly.  “I love you, but I love you enough to let you go, for the good of the world.” 

 

She pulled him close for a brief hug, then released him and headed for the elevator, keeping her back to him as she entered the car and pulled the grate shut.  Her shoulders started heaving as it made its gradual descent and she vanished from view.

 

Well, at least she hadn’t decided to resume their relationship; that would have been a really difficult one to explain away. 

 

***

 

It was several hours later that the real object of his affections showed up at his apartment.

 

“Looking for this?” she drawled.

 

Oliver turned at the sound of her voice.  Sure enough, Chloe stood in his doorway, holding up his cellphone. 

 

He couldn’t get over how beautiful she was.  She was wearing purple today, but, much to his delight, she’d accessorised with the green scarf and Chloé handbag he’d picked out for her.  Her cute hair framed her face like a caress, and the bruise on her face was healing quickly. 

 

Her lips lifted in a gentle smile, but there was a resolute expression in her eyes, a look that gave him a sense of foreboding.

 

He returned her smile and walked towards her.  “Thanks for looking after it for me,” he said warmly, wrapping his hand around hers.  He stroked her hair with his other hand as he stroked her fingers and lowered his forehead to hers.  “I’ve missed you,” he whispered hoarsely. 

 

Chloe swallowed, then turned her hand round and placed his phone in his palm before walking over to the balcony.  “I see you didn’t get my message before Lois dropped in.”

 

He grimaced.  “Awkward doesn’t even begin to cover it.  As soon as I saw her, I panicked and…well, I didn’t know how to tell her that you and I…”

 

“She said you kissed her.” 

 

He reddened.  “Actually, she kissed me.   I didn’t initiate it, but I…kind of gave her the impression that the dinner I’d cooked for you was for her, and then everything just started to spiral out of control –”

 

“It’s okay, Oliver, I understand,” she cut in.  “I couldn’t bring myself to tell her about us, either.” 

 

He walked forward and stood in front of her.

 

“Just so you know,” he said gently, “Lois was here this morning, and before I could get a word in edgeways, she declined re-starting our relationship, citing specific reasons why we can never be.  As far as I’m concerned, Lois and I officially, completely over.”

 

Chloe pursed her lips and looked down at the ground.  “It doesn’t change the way she feels about you.”

 

She fell silent for a while, then she looked up at him with sad eyes and spoke softly. 

 

“She still loves you, Ollie.” 

 

Oliver had a horrible feeling he knew where this was going.  He reached out and took her hands, rubbing them with his thumbs.

 

“Chloe, I can’t help how Lois feels about me, anymore than I can help how I feel about you,” he pleaded.  “Please give us a chance.  Please.”

 

Chloe face crumpled and her voice shook slightly.  “Oliver, I…I can’t do this.” 

 

The feeling of dread that had crept over him threatened to engulf him at her words.  “Chloe, I know how much you love your cousin, but -”

 

“She hasn’t stopped crying since yesterday,” she said numbly.  “I had to hold her all night.  In all my life, I’ve never seen her as broken as she is now.” 

 

Still he refused to give up without a fight.  “Lois is a big girl, Chloe.  She’ll get over it soon, move on…”

 

“And until then we…what, parade our brand new relationship in her face?”  She shook her head and buried her face in her hands.  “I can’t do that to her, Oliver.  I can’t add to her pain like that.”

 

He gave a deep sigh and ran his hand through his hair.  “So where does that leave you and me?” he asked wearily.

 

“Ollie, we…we almost got together one night after a near death experience, and -”

 

He shook his head stubbornly.  “No.  Don’t you dare try and treat this as  proximity-slash-trauma fallout.”

 

“But that’s what happened, Oliver.  We got physical after a particularly thrilling situation, and that’s not healthy.  Relationships based on in intense circumstances never last, you know that.”

 

He narrowed his eyes at her.  “And where did you get that little nugget of information?”

 

She smiled wryly.  “You never watched Speed?” 

 

He gave a short laugh.  “Oh, yeah.  As I recall, Jack and Annie got together at the end of the movie.” 

 

“And they had broken up by the start of the sequel.” 

 

He winced.  “Ah, there is that.”

 

Silence filled the air again, and then she suddenly spoke up.  “Also, I’ve…decided I’m not cut out to be a field agent.” 

 

“Chloe, you can’t throw in the towel after one botched mission,” he argued. 

 

“I don’t have any brawn to bring to the table in a combat situation, Ollie,” she said practically.  “I’m far more useful here, behind the scenes.  I’ll leave the heavy lifting to you guys.” 

 

“Are you sure?” he asked earnestly.  “About everything?”

 

She nodded, and he could see the sadness in her eyes.  “I’m positive.” 

 

He nodded, lowering his gaze as his heart plummeted.  “Okay.  We can still be friends, can’t we?”

 

She smiled.  “We have to be, we need to work together after all this.”

 

He smiled back, even though there was no real joy in him.  “In that case, I’ll schedule a debriefing for 09:00 hours tomorrow.  That’ s not too early for you, is it?”

 

She shook her head.  “That’s fine.  I’ll see you then.” 

 

As she turned to go, he called her sharply.  “Chloe?”

 

She spun round.  “Yeah?” 

 

He swallowed.  “Can I just have one last hug before we push the reset button?” he asked quietly.  He wanted a whole lot more than just a hug, but anything more would result in him breaking down, and he didn’t want to cry in front of her. 

 

She smiled, her own eyes filling with tears.  “I’d like that,” she said, her voice breaking as she stepped over leftover glass fragments and wrapped her hands around his waist. 

 

Oliver’s arms went around her back and he engulfed her in a warm embrace as he lifted a hand to cradle the back of her head gently.  He pulled her up against him tightly and wound his fingers in her hair, burying his face in her neck and inhaling deeply.  Her arms tightened around his waist and he felt her fingers flex at the edge of his t-shirt, as though she were itching to lift it over his head.

 

He was tempted, so tempted.  All he had to do was slide his lips to the side, just a little, and…

 

And he would risk shattering the fragile bond between them.  Chloe was hurting here as much as he was, but the guilt of a relationship with him while her heartbroken cousin watched from a distance would destroy her.  He couldn’t do that to her, wouldn’t be the one to alienate her from the only family she had around her. 

 

He closed his eyes and mentally committed every facet of her body to his memory.  Her breasts were warm against his chest, and he was holding her so close that her heartbeat was thrumming in tune with his.  Predictably, his body began to react to her nearness, and he took a deep breath and dropped his hands to her hips.  He couldn’t resist pressing his hardening cock into her belly, letting her know just now much he still wanted her, before steeling himself and pushing her away from him. 

 

Reluctantly her arms slid away from his middle and she stepped back, moving out of the circle of his arms.  They were both breathing heavily, and took deep breaths to get themselves back to normal. 

 

“I should go,” she finally said, her voice husky and low. 

 

He nodded.  “I’ll see you tomorrow, then.  Goodnight, Watchtower.” 

 

“Goodnight, GA.” 

 

So they were back to using codenames.  He sighed as she stepped into the elevator and turned to salute him with a smile as the car descended.

 

As soon as she was out of his sight, Oliver clenched his fists in fury.  He wanted to weep at the injustice of it all.  He and Chloe had been on the verge of something real, something that was rare and precious.  Unfortunately, time and chance seemed to align against them, and there was fuck-all he could really do about it.

 

Tears stung the corners of his eyes and he clenched his jaw tight, wishing he could punch a wall, or break something.

 

And he would have.  He really would have…if there had been anything left in the apartment to break.

 

***

 

“I spoke to Lois,” Clark said as he stood beside him on the rooftop.  “I’m sorry about what happened.” 

 

Oliver smiled wryly.  He wondered what Clark would do if he knew the real identity of the person who was the reason behind his long face. 

 

Approaching footsteps made both men turn around.  Dinah was walking towards them, sporting her dark-haired daytime look. 

 

“Thank you both for coming,” she said graciously.  “It seems I have a little crow to chow down on.  Is it too late to offer an apology?”

 

“Apology accepted,” Clark said, and she gave a relieved smile. 

 

Oliver said nothing.  He wasn’t really in the mood to make small talk with anyone.

 

“I shan’t be freelancing for Lex anymore,” she said, “and I’ve decided to hang up my fishnets.  I’ll stick to being the word of justice on the airwaves.”

 

“Kind of a waste of your talent, don’t you think?” Oliver said dryly, contributing to the conversation for the first time.  He knew he was probably being a bit rude, but he was still emotionally raw from everything that had happened the past few days. 

 

“I agree,” Clark said eagerly.  “You and the boys could use a den mother.” 

 

Oliver’s eyes narrowed.  Did Clark just attempt to toss him a new blonde sidekick?

 

“I’m afraid I’m not much of a team player, guys,” she said apologetically.

 

“That’s perfect.  You’ll fit right in,” said Clark quickly.  “Won’t she, Ollie?”

 

He wasn’t being paranoid; Clark was laying it on a bit thick.  “We’d be honoured to have you,” he said with an amused smile.

 

“Then it’ll be my pleasure,” she said with a grin. 

 

He smiled.  Maybe it would be good to have another girl around; the boys would certainly appreciate it.  “Come with me,” he said.  “I have some people I’d like you to meet.”

 

As they headed out, Dinah couldn’t resist baiting him.  “Anyone ever tell you that you have lousy taste in women?”

 

He chuckled.  “Bite your tongue, woman.  I recently discovered that I secretly have a thing for tiny, sassy, smart-mouthed women with short blonde hair.”

 

The End.

 

***

 

Coming Soon: Book 4 - Disintegration

 

 

So, there you have it, folks.  And as much as I wish I could say that Book 4 will be all flowers and rainbows, I think the title says it all.  It's gonna get a whole lot worse for our two favourite blondes before it gets better. :-(

 

Now I have to go and start reviewing the barfworthy Season 8.  Wish me luck; I'm gonna need it. :-S


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Date: 2010-02-26 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bklyangel.livejournal.com
Even knowing how this would end, I'm still disappointed.
I can't wait for the sequel.

Date: 2010-02-26 04:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
I'm so sorry, babes. *hugs*

I'll make it up to you, I promise!

Date: 2010-02-26 03:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] simi24.livejournal.com
So that was the reason why Clark wanted Dinah to be in the League. Silly, Clark if he only knew *G*.
Loved it and can't wait for book 4
Good luck with Season 8.

Date: 2010-02-26 04:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Thanks, Rhonda - all your lovely comments are much appreciated! :-)

Date: 2010-02-26 06:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sxymami0909.livejournal.com
*CRIES* I HATE Lois...I'm just saying LOL. This was great. I love how you worked everything together with the episode! So Awesome! :-D

Date: 2010-02-26 08:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"*CRIES* I HATE Lois...I'm just saying LOL."

Aw! Surprisingly, this is one of the few times I actually liked her. She put Oliver before her own needs and wants, and was geniuinely heartbroken. It wasn't her fault that Chloe & Ollie didn't tell her they wanted to be startin' somethin'! :-)

"This was great. I love how you worked everything together with the episode! So Awesome! :-D"

I had no idea it would be as long as it turned out to be. The more I got into it, the more I wanted to do it justice. I'm just so thrilled it worked! :-)

Thanks for all your lovely comments, Corina - you truly make me smile! :-D

Date: 2010-02-26 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angelbsb.livejournal.com
awwww poor chloe and ollie. grrr this makes me hate lois even more for doing what she did to them. i can tell by the name of the next book it will not be easy sailing for chloe and ollie . clark is a bda for trying to get ollie away from chloe by pushing the black canary onto him like that . good luck and all and also PPMS

Date: 2010-02-26 08:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"awwww poor chloe and ollie. grrr this makes me hate lois even more for doing what she did to them."

Hee! And this wasn't really Lois's fault, this time; even though she did put 2 & 2 together and came up with 22. It's actually Chloe & Oliver's duty to set her straight, but Chloe doesn't want her cousin hurting more than she already is.

Oh, the angst... :-(

Still, it gives us ample room to work in the sequels, so I say it's worth the wait!

Glad you like it, Paige, and thanks for all your lovely comments! :-)

Date: 2010-02-26 08:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phoenixnz.livejournal.com
Aww, so not fair. Poor Chloe, and Ollie. Please tell me you're going to make it right in another book. Eventually.

Date: 2010-02-26 04:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Trust me, Leanne - I'm the biggest sucker for happy endings wot ever lived! :-D

Hope you liked it! :-)

Date: 2010-02-26 08:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternal-moonie.livejournal.com
*Cuddles*

Poor Chloe and Ollie! :(

Date: 2010-02-26 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
I'll make it good for them, Jan - promise! :-)

Date: 2010-02-26 01:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitmerlot1213.livejournal.com
I still can't get over how self-absorbed Lois is, and there is a part of me that wants Chloe and Oliver to throw their relationship in her face, but Chloe is too good a person for that.

But the Chlollie hug was just lovely and I can't wait for the next part :):)

Date: 2010-02-26 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
The hug was one of the sweetest things I've written. Even I teared up when they had to break apart. *sniff*

So glad you liked it, Kathy! Thanks for all your lovely comments, they really helped. :-)

Date: 2010-02-26 03:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chlarks-cupid.livejournal.com
aaah you cant end it there! :(
I need more! x

Date: 2010-02-26 04:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Aw, babes *hugs*

That's it for now, I'm afraid, but the saga is not over by a long shot. I believe in happy endings, and I intend to deliver!

Hoped you liked it, anyway! :-)

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Date: 2010-02-26 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] latetothpartyhp.livejournal.com
Great. Now I'm crying. Gah!

So, I noticed "Dinah" starts with "D", and "Disintegration" starts with "D". I'm not going to start hating Dinah in the next book, am I?

Date: 2010-02-26 05:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Great. Now I'm crying. Gah!"
>I'm sorry! *huggles*

"So, I noticed "Dinah" starts with "D", and "Disintegration" starts with "D". I'm not going to start hating Dinah in the next book, am I?"

Rest your mind; Dinah's not going to have anything to do with our blonde couple, dear. You might want to start hating Jimmy, though...I'll just tease that! ;-)

Hope you liked it, even if it did make you cry! :-)

PS: Your username is so spot on, and it means you never have to apologise for being late to the party! I love it! :-D
Edited Date: 2010-02-27 12:44 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-02-27 01:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samanthamt.livejournal.com
:( Stupid Lois. Has to make everything about her... and ruin my Chlollie. Lol. can't wait for the rest of it.

Date: 2010-02-27 02:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Thanks, Sam! I actually feel sorry for Lois in this one, because she is trying to protect Ollie in her own way. It just sucks that everyone thinks she's too fragile to handle the truth.

As for poor Chloe...well, she's used to pain, so for her it's just more of the same. :-(

Glad you liked it! :-)

Date: 2010-02-27 01:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slytherinpunk.livejournal.com
I'm trying to think where to begin, there was so much I loved about this chapter.

Even though before I commented saying I wanted Ollie to hurt as much as Chloe did, I didn't realize that in getting what I wanted, I would be a masochist, lol. Because his emotions had me distraught and pinning and feeling the loss of something real.

I loved how you said he would have broken something in the apartment if there was anything left to break, because before reading that, while I was reading his emotional struggle with watching her go, I was like: "He'd break something after she left if Dinah hadn't already broken everything earlier..."

Lol--we're so in sync darling =)

And I LOVED how you had Ollie suspicious that Clark was trying to force Dinah on as Oliver's new blond sidekick--lol! Just genius! I love your work, I can't wait to read all this again! And I definitely can't wait for the next book! ♥

Date: 2010-02-27 02:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Even though before I commented saying I wanted Ollie to hurt as much as Chloe did, I didn't realize that in getting what I wanted, I would be a masochist, lol. Because his emotions had me distraught and pinning and feeling the loss of something real."

Then that means I've done my job properly, whee!!! :-D

Seriously now, I actually think Ollie's feeling it more than Chloe now. Up till this point, he hasn't really had this deep connection with anyone, and to have it and not be able to work on developing it must be driving him crazy. Chloe, on the other hand, is more stoic and used to dealing with inner heartache. Poor Oliver's in for a bumpy, bumpy ride ahead.

"I loved how you said he would have broken something in the apartment if there was anything left to break, because before reading that, while I was reading his emotional struggle with watching her go, I was like: "He'd break something after she left if Dinah hadn't already broken everything earlier..."

Lol--we're so in sync darling =)"


Yay! Now I feel like I've truly embraced my inner Chlollier - we're sharing brainwaves! LOL!

" I love your work, I can't wait to read all this again! And I definitely can't wait for the next book! ♥"

♥♥♥!

Despite Season 8 being such a disaster from a Chlollie perspective, Disintegration is shaping up a lot better than I'd realised. I really needed them to break up here in Misdirection, because it's pivotal in the pending downward spiral of both of them, but mainly for Oliver.

So now you see why his POV of the break-up was so important!

Thanks for every encouraging comment on the way, slytherinpunk - you really made this a fun journey for me! :-)

Date: 2010-02-27 09:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] modscho.livejournal.com
Damn Dee, did you really need to make me crying? I'm on a emotional rollercoaster with the whole book, what makes you a helluva writer, but leaves me confused and now very very sad.

I knew you would have to end it without the happy end I'm craving so much just yet, but argh. But then a heartbroken Ollie really pulls on my heartstrings and this was BRILLIANT!!! All of them were so easily to understand, even Lois who isn't my favorite. And it was typically Chloe to put her own needs and wants to the side and rather let herself hurt than Lois.

Sorry if the whole review was confused and didn't make much sense, but I haven't collected my thoughts yet.
I NEED to read book 4 NOOOOOOWWWWW!!!

Date: 2010-02-27 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Damn Dee, did you really need to make me crying? I'm on a emotional rollercoaster with the whole book, what makes you a helluva writer, but leaves me confused and now very very sad."

Aw, babes. *hugs* I wish I could say that Book 4 will be brighter, but I'd be lying. All I can do is ask for patience as we work through Book 4 and get around to Books 5 and 6, which I guarantee you'll love. :-)

"I knew you would have to end it without the happy end I'm craving so much just yet, but argh. But then a heartbroken Ollie really pulls on my heartstrings and this was BRILLIANT!!! All of them were so easily to understand, even Lois who isn't my favorite. And it was typically Chloe to put her own needs and wants to the side and rather let herself hurt than Lois."

Thanks, Ines! Yes, it's pain all around for Oliver, Chloe and even Lois (though she has no clue of what's really going on!) And they are yet to face their darkest hour. It ain't gonna be easy. :-(

"Sorry if the whole review was confused and didn't make much sense, but I haven't collected my thoughts yet."

No worries, I was half asleep when I posted it! I'm sure some of my 'thank you' comments don't make any sense, but I'm still too knackered to care! :-P

Ooh, there's gonna be a bit of a wait for that one, babes. Got lots of Chlark stuff to get out there first. But 'Love for Realises' should be along soon, to bridge the gap! :-)

Thanks for all your lovely comments, honey! :-D

Date: 2010-02-27 11:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iluvaqt.livejournal.com
You handled the fallout so well. My heart broke for them both, only now we can understand so much more why Oliver felt so lost when Chloe up and decided to marry Jimmy, and then ran off with Davis and didn't even tell him she was harboring a murderer, she didn't trust him enough to ask for help. I can't wait to see you add your tweaking to help up understand them both. Especially what goes on in Ollie's head. It's my favorite part.

Date: 2010-02-28 12:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Writing Ollie's POV has been challenging but rewarding. Challenging because I'd never ever thought I'd need to write for him from a romantic standpoint, especially with regard to Chloe. But it's all flowing more seamlessly than I could have ever imagined!

Thanks for all your comments, they really make me squee! :-)

Date: 2010-02-27 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unstableharpy.livejournal.com
I just found your series and already love it.
Poor Chloe and Oliver. I really want to hate Lois but can't, she's still just an innocent bystander. Stupid Ollie, could have just thought of a different lie. I feel little bad for Lois too. But not much.
I really love that Chloe decided to end it with Oliver to protect Lois and her feelings.
Oh no, does it mean next story will have Chimmy? Dinah better keep her hands of Ollie.
Can't wait for Disintegration.

Date: 2010-02-28 01:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"I just found your series and already love it."

I'm so honoured. Yay!!! :-D

"Poor Chloe and Oliver. I really want to hate Lois but can't, she's still just an innocent bystander. Stupid Ollie, could have just thought of a different lie. I feel little bad for Lois too. But not much."

I know. It's hard not to feel sorry for Lois, 'cause in her own way she's hurting just as much as Chloe and Ollie are. Curse her shitty sense of timing! Grr!!!

"Oh no, does it mean next story will have Chimmy?"

Afraid so. *sigh* And poor Ollie will not be pleased. :-(

"Dinah better keep her hands of Ollie."

She won't be a problem, don't worry. :-)

Thanks for your kind comments. So glad you liked it! :-)

Date: 2010-03-01 12:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilmoochie.livejournal.com
oh Dee, oh DEEEE! sniff, sniff. Woman you are such a splendid and fabulous enigma. You had the couple so hot your entire fire brigade couldn't have put them out. DAYAM, smokin' hot writing I tell ya.

But woman you just broke my heart! Really? No happy ending yet? I can't wait to read your sequel, Must have a happy ending.

Date: 2010-05-11 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"oh Dee, oh DEEEE! sniff, sniff. Woman you are such a splendid and fabulous enigma. You had the couple so hot your entire fire brigade couldn't have put them out. DAYAM, smokin' hot writing I tell ya"

Oh, thank you Stacey! *blushes* You always say the sweetest things that make me grin like a loon. :-D

"But woman you just broke my heart! Really? No happy ending yet? I can't wait to read your sequel, Must have a happy ending."

Wellllll....*ponders* You'll just have to wait & see, babes. Not promising a happy ending just yet...maybe someday... ;-)

Thanks for your kinds comments, hun! :-)

'Speed' huh?

Date: 2010-03-01 07:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mari2anne.livejournal.com
But you know they only broke up in the second movie because the hunk from the first movie didn't want to be in the second one!

And hunk number two planned on staying around for at least 50 years in spite of the intense circumstances at the beginning of their relationship...

aaaahhhhhh!!! oh, no! >>>>>>>>>> running screaming from the building!!!

OMG, I don't believe it ... I was actually arguing for 'Chlollie' ... See what your writing has done to me??? My poor Chlark heart is weeping in a corner.

Speaking of which, was Clark maybe pushing Dinah closer toward Oliver because he senses something going on between him and Chloe and is maybe jealous?

(Okay, I feel better now, the Chlark heart is still beating... I know, I know, this is a Chlollie fic BUT there is still hope: at least for some extra angst in Book 4, right?)

Oh, no, I just read some of your responses to Cuddles: Jimmy will be a reason for more angst? Oh, you certainly know how to stir it up, don't you, Queen of Angst?

Okay, enough ranting! This was an excellent ending to Book 3, thanks for the warning that it wouldn't end happy; didn't make the tears for our poor couple any less, but it wasn't a total shock... only added extra longing for Book 4 to get written SOON!

Re: 'Speed' huh?

Date: 2010-05-11 11:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"But you know they only broke up in the second movie because the hunk from the first movie didn't want to be in the second one!

And hunk number two planned on staying around for at least 50 years in spite of the intense circumstances at the beginning of their relationship...

aaaahhhhhh!!! oh, no! >>>>>>>>>> running screaming from the building!!!

OMG, I don't believe it ... I was actually arguing for 'Chlollie' ... See what your writing has done to me??? My poor Chlark heart is weeping in a corner."


Yours, mine, and every other Chlarker's hearts on the entire planet, babes! But Oliver treats Chloe so well, and it's hard to root for Clark when he's being such a douche. ;-)

...and the image of you fleeing the room in horror and screaming like a girl is too precious for words! :-D

"Speaking of which, was Clark maybe pushing Dinah closer toward Oliver because he senses something going on between him and Chloe and is maybe jealous?"

Totally. Clark is completely in MY TINY BLONDE!!! ARROWMAN NO TAKE!!! mode. :-)

"(Okay, I feel better now, the Chlark heart is still beating... I know, I know, this is a Chlollie fic BUT there is still hope: at least for some extra angst in Book 4, right?)"

I'll see if I can throw some Chlarky goodness in there just for you, babes. ;-)

"Oh, no, I just read some of your responses to Cuddles: Jimmy will be a reason for more angst? Oh, you certainly know how to stir it up, don't you, Queen of Angst?"

You know me, Mari - I always make it worse before I make it better! :-P

"Okay, enough ranting! This was an excellent ending to Book 3, thanks for the warning that it wouldn't end happy; didn't make the tears for our poor couple any less, but it wasn't a total shock... only added extra longing for Book 4 to get written SOON!"

You know what the funny thing is? Book 4 is all written, bound and published in my head. It's just finding the time to put it all down that's the challenge. I didn't get back from work till almost 10pm tonight, and I have to be up at 5:25 tomorrow. I'm nicking out of my sleep time to reply my comments! But I haven't forgotten y'all, and I'm working on getting my 4 WIPs finished before I start on anything new.

Love you hun, and thanks for the lovely, lovely review and comments! :-D

Date: 2010-03-09 05:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orsi998.livejournal.com
Hi,

Finally I had enough time to read some fic and yours was so amazing :D
I love this new couple and There was so much tension between them in this fic &hearts
Great work Dee &hearts

Date: 2010-05-11 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Hi,

Finally I had enough time to read some fic and yours was so amazing :D"


Orsi! Where have you been? *smishes you*

I know all about being busy, so thanks for picking my stories to read in your precious spare moments. I really appreciate it and am highly honoured by it. :-)

"I love this new couple and There was so much tension between them in this fic &hearts

I'm enjoying Chlollie a whole lot more than I thought I ever would. It's a whole different dynamic from Chlark, and there's so much new territory to explore!

"Great work Dee &hearts"

Thanks so much, Orsi - so glad you like it! :-)

Date: 2010-03-16 07:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pompeypearly.livejournal.com
I have been lurking for a while and thought it was appropriate that i actually reviewed! I absolutely loved this book, I can't wait for Disintegration.

This fic is going down as one of my favourites. Poor Chloe and Oliver! Damn you Lois!!!!

Date: 2010-05-11 11:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"I have been lurking for a while and thought it was appropriate that i actually reviewed! I absolutely loved this book, I can't wait for Disintegration."

Wow, you mean I got you out of lurkdom? YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!! That's one of the highest kinds of praise EVER! Thank you so much for the lurve, Pompey! :-D

"I absolutely loved this book, I can't wait for Disintegration. "

Thanks so much for your kind comments, I'm so glad you liked it. I'm trying to finish all my current WIPs before starting any new stories, but it shouldn't take too long once I get started on Book 4, since it's already pretty much written in my head. :-)

!This fic is going down as one of my favourites. Poor Chloe and Oliver! Damn you Lois!!!!"

Hee! Poor all-of-them, really. Oh, the angst & drama! :-D

Date: 2010-05-11 05:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amazing-07.livejournal.com
I'm so excited for book 4!!!!!!

Date: 2010-05-11 11:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm so glad you liked this story, honey! Thanks so much for commenting. :-)

Date: 2010-05-13 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slytherinpunk.livejournal.com
I was probably too distracted with the utter heartbreak in which you left us off on, to notice before that the cliffhanger at the end seems to be implying a Little GA/BC action...

Please ease my fears with Disintegration soon, because I love your work and need it more than oxygen (I can back that up). ♥

Date: 2010-05-14 07:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"I was probably too distracted with the utter heartbreak in which you left us off on, to notice before that the cliffhanger at the end seems to be implying a Little GA/BC action..."

Never. Repeat, NEVER. He was totally talking about Chloe!

"Please ease my fears with Disintegration soon, because I love your work and need it more than oxygen (I can back that up). ♥"

Aw, thank you! I'm waiting to finish all current WIPs before starting on Disintegration, so you'll have to exercise just a little more patience, babes.

I might be able to throw in a few Chlollie oneshots in the interim as the mood hits, though!

Date: 2010-08-16 02:24 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleja221.livejournal.com
wow....I cant wait for the next book...this id awesome though I wish there had been a happier end here.

Date: 2010-08-16 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
*hugs* I know, babes. But if I'd given them a happy ending here, there would be no sequel. And we like our sequels! ;-)

I'm waiting to finish Love For Realsies before I start posting Disintegration, so I'll continue with this saga soon!

Many thanks for your awesome comments! Glad you liked the story. :-)

Date: 2010-09-20 04:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brittany2922.livejournal.com
Nooooo! I am totally crying right now, still this story was AMAZING!!

Please please pleae tell me you'll start posting book 4 soon, I really can't wait, even though I know it'll be sad.

Date: 2010-09-23 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
I'm so sorry, Brittany - if it helps, it hurt me to break them up, too! :-( *sniffs*

"Please please pleae tell me you'll start posting book 4 soon, I really can't wait, even though I know it'll be sad."

I have some charity fanfics that have taken priority in my writing order, but Disintegration will probably get started in about a month or so. I just need to finish some stuff before I start putting more out there!

So many thanks and so much love for all the sweet comments you posted, Brit - all in one night, too! :-D

Date: 2010-11-02 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mfsaw2003.livejournal.com
I can't believe I'm just reading this. It's really well written and I think you really capture chloe's anxiety over hurting Lois. I can't wait to read more;this was great!!!

Date: 2010-11-03 12:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Well, hello there, Newbie! Welcome to my fanfic! *hugs*

So glad you liked it; it's my original Chlollie series, which I one day hope to get back to. Finding time to write is challenging these days, and I have a few charity stories that have taken writing priority, but hopefully I can get started on Disintergration in about a month's time, or at the very latest early next year.

Many thanks for your kind comments, hun! :-D

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Date: 2010-12-18 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paulingui.livejournal.com
I'm catching up with a lot of your fics!
and this was amazing but so sad in the end :(
I'm in desperate need of happy endings til Chollie comes back to my Tv screen :'(.

And...I'm hating Clark and Lois right now

Date: 2010-12-18 10:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"I'm catching up with a lot of your fics!"

Wow, that is such a compliment. I hope you enjoy them!

"and this was amazing but so sad in the end :("

I have a whole series planned, and will be returning with Disintegration next year, fingers crossed. :-)

"I'm in desperate need of happy endings til Chollie comes back to my Tv screen :'(."

I'll do what I can to ease the sting, babes. *hugs*

"And...I'm hating Clark and Lois right now."

Welcome to the club, Paulingui! I can't stand those two. Clark isn't the same person anymore, and I hate what he's become and how he treats people. Chlollie's much more fun, more relatable - and way hotter!!! :-P

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sequel???

Date: 2011-05-25 10:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chlollie64.livejournal.com
hi!

i read it again...& it's always so amazing!!!!

i hope you'll update soon...Please....tell me....that you think abou it & don't forget to share with us "disintegration"!!!!i'm really looking forward to reading it!

Re: sequel???

Date: 2011-05-25 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Hi babes! Thanks for commenting again and letting me know how much you liked it. :)

I have certainly not forgotten my two favourite blondes, and I'm working on the framework for Disintegration, but I have auction fics to write, and they take priority because they've been paid for already. Also, I now work full time and its hard to find writing time with the demands of a young family. But I'm not going anywhere, and hope you'll still be interested in reading this when I eventually get around to writing it! :-D
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