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At. LAST.

 

To those of you who have made this journey with me thorough 51,000 words, 141 pages, 2,250 paragraphs and 7,117 lines, I say a massive, massive thank you.  I’ve loved having you every step of the way, and your feedback has encouraged me, inspired me and pushed me to be a better writer.

 

What can I say?  You all ROCK!!! J

 

Enjoy.

 

 

 

Epilogue

 

Title:               Wounded Heart

Author:          BabyDee
Pairing:          Chlark

Rating:           PG

Warnings:      None
Timeline:       Post-‘Legion’

Disclaimer:    All characters belong to the CW & DC comics. 

 
Read previous chapter here.
Read story from the beginning here.

 

“Have you packed enough diapers?”

 

Lois smiled at her cousin as they sorted out Kallie’s bags in the nursery.  “If I run out, I’ll just pop down to the store and re-stock.”

 

“Okay.”  Chloe went to Kallie’s dresser and started hunting around.  “Don’t forget the First Aid kit.  It’s-”

 

“Already in the baby bag.”

 

“Oh.  Right.”  Chloe bent to stroke Kallie’s hair and was rewarded with a bright smile from her daughter.  “For breakfast she likes-”

 

“Wholegrain cereal, and for dinner she prefers the chicken casserole,” finished Lois.  “Her favourite dessert is apple pie and custard, and she doesn’t sleep without her mini-Shelby.”  She took a step forward.  “Chloe, you can relax.  She’s going to be fine with Jimmy and me.”  

 

Chloe sighed.  “I know, Lois, I just…”

 

“You’ve never spent a night away from her, I know,” said Lois gently.  “But you and Clark deserve a proper honeymoon, and you’ll only be gone a week.  She’ll be fine.  We’ll take excellent care of her.  And Jimmy’s gonna go crazy with the camera.  Think of the gigabytes of baby pictures you’ll come home to.”

 

Chloe picked up her child and cuddled her close.  “I bet she’ll have the time of her life.  I’m the one that’s going to be a mess,” she said ruefully.

 

Lois grinned evilly.  “Oh, don’t you worry.  I’m sure Clark will find interesting ways to distract you,” she said with a conspiratorial wink.

 

Chloe laughed, then her expression became serious.  “Are you sure you can handle Kallie for the entire week?  Not to be judgemental, but you’ve never really looked after a baby before.  We could always ask Clark’s mom to stay back for a few days.”

 

Lois shook her head.  “I’m sure.  And until a few months ago, you’d never looked after a baby either.  Not to mention I did my fair share of looking after you and Lucy when you were little.”  She sighed.  “And besides, I need all the practice I can get.”

 

“Oh, motherhood is pretty much a ‘learn-on-the-job’ thing,” Chloe said as she zipped up Kallie’s bag.  “You wouldn’t believe how many times I freaked out when-” she stopped, her brain finally processing Lois’s last comment.

 

“Lois, are you…?” her eyes narrowed as her gaze dropped to her cousin’s midriff.

 

Lois smiled shyly, placing a tentative hand on her belly.  “It’s early days yet, but-”

 

“Oh my God!”  Chloe rushed over and gathered her cousin close in a hug.  “Congratulations!  I can’t believe it!  Are you feeling alright?  How far along are you?” 

 

“I feel fine, and it’s just been a couple of months,” she replied happily.

 

“Jimmy must be over the moon!  Oh, I can’t wait to tell Clark!”  Chloe said excitedly.

 

“I think Jimmy’s telling him as we speak,” beamed Lois. 

 

***

 

 “That’s awesome!  Congratulations!” said Clark as he clapped Jimmy on the back.

 

“Thanks, CK,” Jimmy said, grinning.  “Baby’s due in the fall.  Lois and I are so excited.”

 

“You’ll make a great father,” Clark said enthusiastically.  “Good thing you’re getting your feet wet with Kallie.”

 

He smiled.  “I’m looking forward to it, she’s a lovely little girl.  Speaking of Kallie, does she have any…special needs that I need to be aware of?”

 

Clark frowned.  “Well, she’s not lactose intolerant, and she doesn’t have any allergies so far,” Clark replied.

 

Jimmy nodded thoughtfully.  “Okay.  I just want you to know that she’ll be safe with us, Clark.  I won’t let anything happen to her.”

 

“Thanks, Jimmy.  I appreciate it.”  Clark had a nagging feeling that Jimmy’s words went below the surface, but he put it out of his mind as Chloe and Kallie approached with Lois.  He beamed at his wife’s cousin.

 

“Congratulations,” he said hugging her.  He adopted a mock mobster voice and added with a rasp, “I hope your first child is a masculine child.”

 

She shoved him playfully in the shoulder.  “And there I was thinking you were a man of the new millennium,” she retorted.  “No worries – you have a houseful of girls.  I have no doubt in my mind that they’ll show you the way of the future.” 

 

Clark grinned as he took Kallie from her mother for a goodbye cuddle.  “So what are you two hoping for?”

 

Jimmy’s arm went around Lois’s waist and they shared a loving look.  “We’re happy either way, but a little girl would be nice” he said.  “Kallie’s set a good precedent.”

 

“Hmm.”  Clark looked thoughtful for a minute, then smiled at them.  “All the best.”

 

“Thanks, Smallville.”  Lois looked at her watch.  “I hate to hurry you up, but if you two don’t get a move on, you’re gonna miss your flight,” she pointed out.

 

“True.”  Clark sighed and kissed Kallie’s forehead.  “See you in a week, kiddo.”  He handed her over to Chloe, who kissed her and held her tightly before handing her over to Lois.

 

“Take care of my baby,” she said emotionally.

 

“I’ll protect her with my life,” said Jimmy honestly.  “You can trust me.”

 

***

 

“I think Jimmy knows your secret,” Chloe said.

 

Clark looked across the table at Chloe as they dined at sundown on the balcony of their penthouse suite at the Iberostar Rose Hall Beach Hotel.  As an apology for missing their wedding, Ollie had gifted them with First Class flights and the presidential suite at the renowned Five Star hotel in Montego Bay, Jamaica, complete with all perks.

 

He frowned.  “What makes you think that?” he asked as he finished off a particularly tasty pineapple dessert.

 

She shrugged.  “Just some of the things he said.  Reminded me of the time I thought you were a meteor freak but didn’t want to confront you about it.”

 

“What did he say?”

 

“Well, for starters, when he was taking my pictures at the wedding, he made a comment about being a perfect Red-Blue Bride.”

 

His eyes widened.  “Whoa.  That explains it.”

 

“Explains what?”

 

“When I was waiting for you to come down the aisle, he mentioned that you looked exactly like the woman I should be getting married to.  And before we left, he asked if Kallie had any ‘special needs’.”  He put his fork down and rested his chin on his hands thoughtfully.

 

“He thought she might have your abilities,” Chloe mused.  He nodded.

 

She looked at him intently.  “What are you gonna do, Clark?”

 

He looked up at her.  “When we get back, I’m going to tell him the truth.  Lois as well.”

 

 “Are you sure?” she asked calmly.

 

He nodded, smiling.  “Something tells me they can be trusted.”

 

Chloe smiled back.  “I’m glad.  I felt terrible lying to him before.  And Lois has proved loyal to Ollie’s secret, so handling yours should be easy pickings for her.”

 

He grinned lazily.  “Speaking of easy pickings…” he supersped over to where she was seated, swept her up in his arms and whooshed over to the plush bedroom in one swift move. 

 

He deposited her on the bed and settled himself over her.  “Didn’t you say something about honouring me with your body yesterday?”

 

“I did indeed,” she purred sexily, burrowing her fingers through his hair.  “And I recall you saying something eerily similar to me.”

 

“I believe my exact words were, ‘with my body, I thee worship’,” he murmured against her throat.

 

“I like that.  It makes me feel like a goddess.”  She trailed her fingers lightly down his chest, making him shiver.  “But before you head for the altar, could I ask a tiny favour?”

 

“For you, my heart, I’d turn back time,” he said solemnly.

 

“Can I just call Lois & Jimmy for a minute?  I want to check on Kallie.”

 

“I’ll do you one better.”  He cocked his head slightly and activated his superhearing.  Then he grinned.

 

Chloe relaxed.  “I take it she’s okay?” she queried.

 

“Kallie’s fine.  It’s Lois I’m worried about.”

 

“Lois?”

 

He nodded.  “Sounds like Kallie just introduced her auntie’s thumb to her two lower front teeth.”

 

“Ouch!”  Chloe laughed.  “I still can’t believe Lois is gonna be a Mom.  I mean, babysitting is one thing, but actually having your own kid is a real life-changer.”  She rested her head on his chest.  “Lois and Jimmy are really gonna have their hands full.”

 

“True.  And those hands are gonna be fuller than they think,” he said with a wry grin.

 

She sat up at his conspiratorial tone and fixed him with a stern look.  Clark?  What did you do?”

 

He looked sheepish.  “I x-rayed her.  They’re having twins.”

 

“Eek!” she screeched.  “I don’t believe it!”

 

“And that’s not all,” he added.

 

Her eyes widened till they looked like little saucers.  “There’s more?” 

 

He nodded.  “I could be wrong…but I think they’re boys.”

 

“Ha!” she exclaimed.  “Lois is going to freak when she finds out!  She and Jimmy had better enjoy the relative peace and quiet while they still can!”

 

“Speaking of relative peace and quiet,” he chuckled, “I heard that this resort is home to one of the most exclusive beaches in Jamaica.”

 

She raised her eyebrows.  “Oh, did you, now?” she drawled seductively.

 

He smiled, a twinkle in his eyes.  “Yeah, it’s supposedly the prefect atmosphere for romance and relaxation.”  He picked her up and headed for the balcony.  “What do you say, Chloe?  Should we check it out?”

 

“Romance and relaxation, huh?” she mused.  “Why do I get the feeling there won’t be too much ‘relaxation’ going on?”

 

He grinned as he carried her in his arms and floated off the balcony.  “Because we’ll be too busy ‘worshipping’ each other, I think.  But hey, what do I know?”

 
***

The End.

 

 

 

*wipes brow* J 

 

And now I really need to tinkle! *superspeeds to the bathroom*

 

Date: 2009-05-08 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chaliebrown363.livejournal.com
Awwww! I don't know what to say, other than I enjoyed this story so much and I hate that it's ending!

Date: 2009-05-09 09:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Hee! Don't worry, I'm sure I'll start on another one soon enough! But I'm glad you liked this one. I really feel like I've accomplished something great!

Date: 2009-05-08 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] red-81.livejournal.com
Hooray, for completion! Boo, that it's over! A perfect ending for a perfect story. When you said that the epilogue would be right up, I had no idea you would post so soon. Congratulations to JLo for the twins, I hope that they're very happy. Thanks so much for taking the time to write this story, and taking me to a world where Chlark finally realize what they mean to one another. Hopeful we'll get another story soon? *Uses puppy dog eyes* I loved every minute of it.

Date: 2009-05-10 05:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Hooray, for completion! Boo, that it's over!"

My sentiments exactly! Sort of a mixed blessing, isn't it? :-/

"A perfect ending for a perfect story."

Thank you. I'm glad you think so, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)

"Congratulations to JLo for the twins, I hope that they're very happy."

Oh, they will be. I can't pass up a chance to write 'The Olsen Twins' now, can I?!? Futurefic, here we come! :-D

"Thanks so much for taking the time to write this story, and taking me to a world where Chlark finally realize what they mean to one another."

You're welcome. Heck, if PS3 won't do it...! :-P

"Hopeful we'll get another story soon? *Uses puppy dog eyes* I loved every minute of it."

I'm a sucker for puppy dog eyes! And I'd be honoured to write for you again.

Thanks for all your lovely comments!

Date: 2009-05-08 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cifan70.livejournal.com
The epic story is done and I loved it. *sobs* I don't want it to be over. Another story in the works, maybe? I can hope, right. Excellent story.

Date: 2009-05-10 04:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Aw! *wipes your tear away* All good things come to an end, as they say. But I'll be back. I can't resist the lure of 'The Olsen Twins!' :-D

And I'm so, so glad you liked it. It was a pleasure writing it, and your feedback encouraged & inspired me all the way! :)

So thank you, from the bottom of my heart. *hugs*

Date: 2009-05-08 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carcassi.livejournal.com
Congratulations, Dee!! *Awards you a huge, blue-and-red prize ribbon* Considering it took me more than two years to finish a fic of about the same length, I'm awed at the way you super-sped through this while still managing to write a top-notch story.

I knew there was something odd about Jimmy's remark in the last chapter! I should have put two and two together back then, but you were very subtle about it. It makes sense that he would figure out that RBB = Clark with his photographer's eye, since of course those are Clark's favorite colors, too. I give him credit for not spilling the beans to Lois without permission (just as Lois protected Ollie's secret). Dare I say it--you've actually made Jimmy likeable again. *Boggles*

I love it that Clark was so impatient to get started "worshipping" that he short-cut Chloe's phone call and peeked at Kallie and Lois. (And--hee!--I can just see Lois and Jimmy chasing after twin boys! THAT's what I call poetic justice. *BG*)

“Romance and relaxation, huh?” she mused. “Why do I get the feeling there won’t be too much ‘relaxation’ going on?”

He grinned as he carried her in his arms and floated off the balcony. “Because we’ll be too busy ‘worshipping’ each other, I think. But hey, what do I know?”


Eeee, floating Chlark! And a beach! *Melts* What a perfect ending. If only the show would end this way, too. :)

Now, will there be a sequel? *Raises brows hopefully* :D

Thank you again, Dee, for bringing us such wonderful romantic Chlark!

Date: 2009-05-10 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Congratulations, Dee!! *Awards you a huge, blue-and-red prize ribbon* Considering it took me more than two years to finish a fic of about the same length, I'm awed at the way you super-sped through this while still managing to write a top-notch story."

*grabs ribbon & pins it to chest excitedly* Thanks, Debs! The pleasure is all mine. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

"I knew there was something odd about Jimmy's remark in the last chapter! I should have put two and two together back then, but you were very subtle about it."

Nice catch! I thought maybe I was a bit TOO subtle, but a few of you seem to have picked up on it, so that's cool.

"It makes sense that he would figure out that RBB = Clark with his photographer's eye, since of course those are Clark's favorite colors, too. I give him credit for not spilling the beans to Lois without permission (just as Lois protected Ollie's secret). Dare I say it--you've actually made Jimmy likeable again. *Boggles*"

Hee! It was the least I could do for the guy after giving him a tiny winkie. That aside, I actually felt bad for him in Identity when he told Clark he could be trusted, and was shot down by both him and Chloe. Go Jimmy!

"I can just see Lois and Jimmy chasing after twin boys! THAT's what I call poetic justice. *BG*"

Ha! The Olsen Twins will be popping up in some futurefics, I kid you not!!! :-P

"Now, will there be a sequel? *Raises brows hopefully* :D"

Wait and see, you never know! :)

"Thank you again, Dee, for bringing us such wonderful romantic Chlark!"

You're welcome anytime! And thanks for your comments, they have made me squee and inspired me no end. Thanks again! *hugs*

Date: 2009-05-08 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shiverslala.livejournal.com
awww! such a lovely ending! the adventure is over, i'm kinda sad lol thanks, I needed that, a fluffly, loving and sexy fic.

Date: 2009-05-10 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
I aim to please! And it looks like I did. Yay!

Thanks so much for reading, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for all your wonderful comments! :)

Date: 2009-05-08 07:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chloista4ever.livejournal.com
I LOVE YOU!!!

Such a sweet ending! and hey a jois double baby :-D

really Dee this fic is uber fantastic hope to read more atories from you. ;-)

Date: 2009-05-10 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Thanks, Ana! Your stalking paid off, yay!

It's been a real pleasure, and I'll definitely be writing more! Thanks for all your lovely feedback as well. *hugs*

Date: 2009-05-09 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lust-4sorrow.livejournal.com
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
That was such an awesome ending to a great story. I love the Chlark banter and I'm glad Lois and Jimmy are having twins. *Claps*
Amazing job on this =]

Date: 2009-05-10 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Thank you, thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and your feedback has been so encouraging.

Thanks again! :)

Date: 2009-05-09 05:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] excelaunt.livejournal.com
Congrats on completing this story. It was fatastic. And I have to admit, I'm smiling at the thought Jois is having little twin boys. That was a nice touch.

I was wondering if one of the Kryptonian powers might kick in while Chlark's away making another baby. What a way to find out Clark's an alien! Reminds me a little of the extra on my "Incredibles" DVD.

Date: 2009-05-11 01:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Congrats on completing this story."

Thanks for sticking with me! And I'll say that your comments and feedback provided me with lots of info and tidbits as we went along, so give yourself a pat on the backfor being such an inspiration!

"I was wondering if one of the Kryptonian powers might kick in while Chlark's away making another baby. What a way to find out Clark's an alien! Reminds me a little of the extra on my "Incredibles" DVD."

Bwah! That would be hilarious. And interesting! *twirls imaginary moustache* Watch this space, people! ;-)

Once again, thanks for going the distance with me, babes. You're amazing! :)

Date: 2009-05-09 09:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] easilyenraged.livejournal.com
Just found this a couple days ago, its fantastic, I think I'll have to go read some more of your work.

Date: 2009-05-09 10:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
A new reader, yay! Welcome to my fic.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! I haven't really written much, this is just my third story. If you want to read the other two, here are the links:

Right in Front of You: http://babydee1.livejournal.com/2422.html. A 13-chapter long romantic Chlark story

Mexican Standoff:http://babydee1.livejournal.com/15766.html. A short, humourous Chlark oneshot.

Hope you like those as well. Thanks for commenting! :)

Date: 2009-05-09 11:17 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-05-09 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mari2anne.livejournal.com
Beautiful. I loved Chloe's slightly panicky reluctance to leave Kallie; a true Mom! Liked your Lois also, the cousin Chloe deserved!

Ah, and you answered the question I had from Ch25; silly of me, I didn't get it right away!

So sad this tale has ended; enjoyed every chapter. Would love a peek into the near future of Clark revealing his secret to Lois and Jimmy...

I'm so greedy! You've spent so much time and talent sharing this story with us...I'll just say "THANK YOU" and that I look forward to reading when you write more...

Date: 2009-05-11 01:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Ah, and you answered the question I had from Ch25; silly of me, I didn't get it right away!"

No, but I had you guessing, which was exactly what I wanted! Clever you! :)

"Would love a peek into the near future of Clark revealing his secret to Lois and Jimmy..."

Everyone wants to see this! Guess I'll have to write it, then...*sigh* Watch this space! ;-)

"You've spent so much time and talent sharing this story with us...I'll just say "THANK YOU" and that I look forward to reading when you write more..."

Once again, thanks for every comment. Each one made me squee, and I look forward to writing my next fic! :-D

Date: 2009-05-10 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marikology.livejournal.com
I loved this story so much from beginning to end, thank you so much for sharing it with us.

Date: 2009-05-11 01:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for reading. It's been fun! :)

Date: 2009-05-11 12:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] margroks.livejournal.com
Thanks for this lovely tale! I'm so glad you regained your enthusiasm and finished it up! Perhaps there will still be something to inspire you to write more.

Date: 2009-05-11 01:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Thank you! Glad you liked it.

Excelaunt has already planted a plotbunny in my head for a little sequel, so I'm gonna get started on that!

Thanks for all your comments, margroks! :)

Date: 2009-05-11 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] christina-kat.livejournal.com
I missed this post!
I really loved it! and I can't wait for more of your stories!

Date: 2009-05-11 05:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Thanks, CK! You were the first one to comment way back when I posted the prologue. Thanks for sticking with me, and I'm so glad you liked the journey! :)

Date: 2009-05-11 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurelnola.livejournal.com
YAAAAAAAAAY!!!

The perfect end to a fantastic story, Dee! Take a bow!

"“Congratulations,” he said hugging her. He adopted a mock mobster voice and added with a rasp, “I hope your first child is a masculine child.”

That had me rolling. I always miss those lighthearted moments where Clark shows off his sense of goofiness. :-)

But this made me laugh so hard my kid came running to make sure I was okay:

“I x-rayed her. They’re having twins.”


HA!!!!! Oh my sides. Just the thought of Jois twin boys running around, freaking out their parents is an image that is just too delicious.

I worship this ending, Dee! You did a tremendous job. :-D

Date: 2009-05-12 10:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"The perfect end to a fantastic story, Dee! Take a bow!"

*genuflects prettily* Thank you, Dawn! I'm glad you liked it!

"That had me rolling. I always miss those lighthearted moments where Clark shows off his sense of goofiness. :-)"

Gotta lurve The Godfather! ;-) I had to throw a movie quote in there somewhere. And it turns out Clark was doubly correct!
:-P

So glad you had a great time with this fic. Thanks for all your lovely comments!

So...when are The Queens gonna make their next appearance, huh? Huh?? :)

Date: 2009-05-12 12:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurelnola.livejournal.com
"when are The Queens gonna make their next appearance, huh?"

As soon as my computer is fixed (I'm using Seamus' computer)- it's where all my photos for the stories are! *pouts*

Date: 2009-05-12 05:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Aw, you poor thing! I bet you feel naked without your own computer!

I hope its nothing serious. Please tell whoever's fixing your system that they SHOULD NOT RE-FORMAT, or you'll be in for a shock when it gets back!!!

Date: 2009-05-12 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurelnola.livejournal.com
The sucky thing is that there's nothing wrong with the system- it's the DC adapter within the laptop that's come loose, so that it can't hold a charge even when plugged in! And, even though I do back up my system (er, sometimes), I hadn't backed up in a couple of months and I can't get the laptop to stay on long enough to back up the rest of the system. So now I just have to hope I can find someone who knows how to solder the DC adapter back into place without frying my laptop, and a good portion of my fan fic along with it. *crosses fingers*

Date: 2009-05-13 02:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Ugh. I hate it when that happens! Good news is it *should* be fairly easy to fix.

Good luck! *crosses fingers for you*

Date: 2009-05-13 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amcnh.livejournal.com
This fic was rec'd by [livejournal.com profile] ellyfanfiction so I came on round to take a look. I can't believe I've missed your stuff being posted. This had a wonderful arch, full of great dialog that was very true to the characterizations, I loved the whole miscommunication thing and how Clark called Chloe on it. Kallie sounds absolutely adorable. There are places that I got scared (I thought Chloe was actually being tortured cause she had been captured!!), choked up (when Chlark said goodbye on the train platform and again when Clark sped into the delivery room), laughed at the snark and sighed happily at the I do's.
I hope that you will do follow up one-shots or perhaps a series with Kallie involved...or another baby on the way. :)
Thanks so much for writing. I really enjoyed this piece.
Edited Date: 2009-05-13 06:08 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-05-13 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Hello! Always happy to welcome new readers.

"This had a wonderful arch, full of great dialog that was very true to the characterizations."

Thank you! I didn't think this fic would be more than 15 chapters, but with Chlark the dialogue just writes itself. I often ended up splitting chapters into two because the posts were longer than LJ allows!

"Kallie sounds absolutely adorable."

A Chlark baby girl with her daddy's super good looks...what's not to love? :)

"There are places that I got scared (I thought Chloe was actually being tortured cause she had been captured!!)..."

*sheepish* That was cruel of me, wasn't it? I wanted to try my hand at angst, and also see if the shock reveal of Chloe's pregnancy would work. I'm pleased to see that it did! :)

"choked up (when Chlark said goodbye on the train platform and again when Clark sped into the delivery room)..."

The platform goodbye even made ME cry. The delivery scene had to be re-written because I actually didn't want Clark to make it in time. However, unlike PS3 I listened to popular demand and changed it, and I'm so glad I did because it turned out even better!

"laughed at the snark and sighed happily at the I do's."

After all the crap they went through, they deserved a happy ending, don't you think? ;-)

"I hope that you will do follow up one-shots or perhaps a series with Kallie involved...or another baby on the way. :)"

Oh, definitely. I'm just waiting till after the finale airs before I get started. I'm bouncing a few ideas around in my head, and I'll let you know when they make it to paper!

"Thanks so much for writing. I really enjoyed this piece."

*beams like a headlamp* So glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reading, and thanks to Elly for reccing me!

Date: 2009-09-28 03:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] psyco23.livejournal.com
yeah, i know how late this comment is but... this is fantastic.

can i hope for a sequel??? with the twins and perhaps a little brother for kal-elle?? oh and the reaction of jois to the big secret... that would be awesome :)

please???

Date: 2009-09-28 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"yeah, i know how late this comment is but... this is fantastic."

Thanks, psycho! Okay, that sounds rude, but I don't know what else to call you! :( This was just my second fic, but I'm pleased with how well it turned out and how much people liked it.

"can i hope for a sequel??? with the twins and perhaps a little brother for kal-elle?? oh and the reaction of jois to the big secret... that would be awesome :)

please???"


A sequel or two is actually in the works, and I intend to start work on it this week. Fingers crossed it'll be ready for the Jois prompt for Fun Fanon Fridays!

Thanks so much for commenting!

Date: 2009-09-28 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
PS: It's NEVER too late for a comment!

Date: 2012-01-17 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jlvsclrk.livejournal.com
Bravo! I found this story thanks to Carol's new cover and had a blast reading it. You really psyched me out with that faux torture routine in the early chapters - great fake out! I really loved all the baby details along the way, and am so glad everyone got their happily ever after. Great job!

Date: 2012-01-18 11:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Bravo! I found this story thanks to Carol's new cover and had a blast reading it."

Carol is so talented and generous, I'm blessed to have her on my f-list. She's the BEST! :-D

"You really psyched me out with that faux torture routine in the early chapters - great fake out!"

*squees* I really caught people out with that one! I'm just glad no-one sussed it before the big reveal. ;-)

"I really loved all the baby details along the way, and am so glad everyone got their happily ever after. Great job!"

So glad you liked it! I had just given birth to my second, I think, when I wrote this story, so a lot of the labour & delivery details were true. Needless to say, we're stopping at two! :-P

So glad you liked it, Jen. Thanks so much for your comments! :-D

like this whole story

Date: 2012-08-06 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cheleyluna.livejournal.com
its cool how the story went and the issue with jimmy and lois was sorta weird. that one pairing i found unique. the over all story was sweet in some areas and honestly at first i thought she was being tortured not having a baby. then it dawned on me you did that on purpose, smart.

Re: like this whole story

Date: 2013-02-07 08:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
How on earth did I miss this post?!? :-O

"its cool how the story went and the issue with jimmy and lois was sorta weird. that one pairing i found unique."

I admit, they are an unconventional pairing, but in a weird way, they kind of work! :-)

" the over all story was sweet in some areas and honestly at first i thought she was being tortured not having a baby. then it dawned on me you did that on purpose, smart"

*sheepish grin* That was naughty of me, I know - sorry! Glad you liked the story, I really appreciate your lovely comments. Oh, and my sincere apologies for replying to you so late! :-)
Edited Date: 2013-02-07 08:38 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-02-07 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] david fuson (from livejournal.com)
I love this one even more than the last one,I can really see this happening,u made them into a wonderful couple,it has been a wonderful story that I loved reading,I can,t wait to read bedtime blues,you are truly a talented writer.

Date: 2013-02-07 08:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
I love it when new people discover my older stories, more so when they enjoy them and leave a comment!

So glad you liked it, babes. Can't wait to hear your thoughts on Bedtime Blues! :-)

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