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Another segment in the saga draws to a close, my lovelies!  I hope you like it, and I look forward to starting on the next instalment soon. 

Enjoy! :-) 



Title:              Beauty in the Breakdown VII: Sacred Words
Author:          BabyDee
Pairing:          Chlollie
Rating:           NC-17 (this chapter PG-13)
Warnings:     A Re-telling of Chlollie post-Warrior
Timeline:      Season 9
Disclaimer:   All characters belong to the CW & DC comics. 
Series Summary:     With Oliver by her side, Chloe learns to let go, find peace, and fall in love.
Story Summary: Chloe and Oliver finally exchange those three little words - in their own inimitable style, of course. ;)
Feedback:      …Always.  :)
 
BITB Series inspired by my favourite song on the Chlollie playlist [livejournal.com profile] sxymami0909 sent me.  Thanks, Cori! :) 
 
Brilliant banner by [livejournal.com profile] we_are_parallel.  Thanks so much for letting me use your awesome work! ;)
 
Read previous chapter here
Read story from the beginning here

 
Chapter 5
 
 
Chloe and Oliver wasted no time making up for the brief spell they’d spent apart.  They made love several times through the night, their intimate union all sweeter than ever for the declarations of love that accompanied them. 
 
She’d never have thought a perfect relationship could get any better, but it had, and she was surprised and delighted by the sheer intensity of her feelings for him.  Heck, even the sex was better; richer somehow, deeper and more fulfilling, no longer on just a physical level. 
 
“I love you,” he whispered, stroking her damp hair off her forehead as she basked in the afterglow of his lovemaking.  “You know I do, don’t you?” 
 
She smiled and gazed lovingly at him.  “I know.  But I’ll never get tired of hearing it.”  She took his hand and pressed it over her heart.  “I love you too, Ollie.  I always will.” 
 
“Good to know.”  He grinned back at her, and then his smile turning into a deep yawn as he stretched, his arms going out wide.  “Man, I am so worn out…” 
 
Chloe snorted and gave him a sardonic look.  “Yeah, three nookies in one night will do that to a man,” she giggled. 
 
“And not to a woman?” he challenged wearily, switching off the bedside lamp and snuggling close to her.  “No fair.  How come you’re not tired?” 
 
“I napped all afternoon, remember?” she reminded him, running her fingers through his spiky hair.
 
“Oh, right.  Well, I’d love to stay and chat, but my eyes just can’t stay open any longer.  G’night, honey.”  He gave her arm a gentle squeeze and then started to drop off. 
 
Suddenly she remembered something.  “Oh - Ollie?”
 
He cracked one tired eye open.  “Yah…?”
 
“You wanted to give me something, earlier?”
 
He grinned.  “Oh, I gave it to you, alright.”
 
“Not that, silly,” she giggled, thumping him.  “Something else; a gift, or…?”
 
“Gift?” he mumbled sleepily.  “Oh, that…” he reached out and pulled open the dresser drawer one-handed, fumbling blindly in it until his fingers closed around an object which he extricated and pressed into her palm.  “…There ya go.” 
 
“Aw, Ollie!” she exclaimed, her eyes widening at the sight of the Cartier-branded black velvet jewellery box.  Oliver had surprised her with an emerald necklace a month ago, and had suggested rather strongly (despite her loud protests) that they needed a pair of matching earrings to complete the look.  Slowly she lifted the lid, fully expecting to see two small green gems twinkling in a bed of velvet. 
 
Instead, she was greeted with the sight of a sparkling square-cut diamond set in a 24-karat platinum ring. 
 
***
 
Chloe’s eyes nearly popped out of her head. 
 
She stared at the rings and blinked, thinking she must surely be seeing images projected by her subconscious which was probably still on a euphoric high from the I love you’s of the day.  Closing the lid, she shook her head wildly and then stared inside the box again, but the items within neither disappeared into thin air nor morphed into emerald studs. 
 
On closer inspection she noticed that the ring box also contained both a classic platinum band and an eternity ring that was set with a small central emerald, flanked by three equal-sized diamonds on either side.
 
Her heart fluttered wildly in her chest.  Now she knew why Oliver had sounded so earnest on the phone: he was planning to propose to her. 
 
“Oliver…” she swallowed and started again, prodding him a little.  “Honey…”
 
He stirred and snuggled closer to her.  “Hmm?” 
 
“Oliver…this is a ring.” 
 
He nodded.  “Mmm-hmm.”
 
“It…looks like an engagement ring and a wedding ring set,” she clarified, her voice surprisingly even.   
 
“Mmm, they are,” he mumbled with sleepy pride.  “I picked them out myself this very morning, and I have this…whole grand speech I was working on…” he trailed off, and she shook his shoulder hard, jogging him awake again.
 
“Grand speech?” she echoed.  “What grand speech?” 
 
He waved a tired hand in the air.  “Y’know…the love we share, never wanna live without you, you complete me, yadda yadda yadda…” he turned over in bed and yawned.  “Oh, what the heck.  You’ll marry me, right?”
 
She blinked.  “Uh – yeah, sure.”
 
“Cool.” He tightened his arms around her and started drifting off.
 
“Oh wait,” he said, dragging one eye open as he tried to slide backwards off the bed.  “sorry…almost forgot; should I like, get down on one knee, or---”
 
“Ollie,” she whispered tenderly, grasping his shoulders and heaving him back up, “You’re rambling.  Go to sleep, okay?  We’ll talk in the morning.”
 
“Mmmkay.”  He gave her a grateful, lazy smile and flopped forward onto the bed with an unceremonious thump. 
 
“Night, honey,” he mumbled into the pillow.  “…love you.” 
 
“Love you, too.”
 
He relaxed and his lashes drifted shut again.  A few seconds later he was asleep, snoring lightly. 
 
***
 
Chloe regarded her sleeping fiancé with a raised brow.
 
Fiancé.
 
Ooookay. 
 
In the space of less than two hours, they had somehow not only both declared their love for each other, but also somehow gotten engaged. 
 
She stared at the rings in the box for a moment longer, and her brow furrowed in thought.  Getting engaged was a big step; had she been too hasty?  Maybe she should have held back a little bit before making a commitment.  Or at least waited until the proposer was more than semi-conscious, she thought wryly. 
 
But try as she might, she couldn’t find even a smidgeon of doubt in her mind to tarnish her decision.  She and Oliver loved each other.  He was the man she wanted to be with, and that was the truth.  Convention dictated that they date a while further before making firm plans, but hey; they never had done anything the conventional way in their relationship, and it had worked brilliantly well for them so far.  No sense in trying to fix what wasn’t broken. 
 
Without a moment’s hesitation, Chloe lifted the rings out of the box and slid all three of them onto her the third finger of her left hand.  She stretched out her arm and inspected the sparkling gems on her finger, and smiled broadly. 
 
They were a perfect fit.  Much like herself and Oliver. 
 
Smiling, she settled down in Oliver’s arms, planted a quick kiss on his lips and drifted off into a peaceful, pleasant slumber.
 
***
 
…So in love with this feeling, tonight I’ll be sleeping
Sleeping with my eyes wide shut
 
- JLS, Eyes Wide Shut
 
 
The End.
 
Coming Soon: Beauty in the Breakdown VIII – Living Life 

Date: 2011-11-16 02:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madlenita.livejournal.com
Wow, i definitelly didn't expecting this... But this is a wonderfu ending of this part of story...
Now i only wondered how Lois will reacted on this news ;-).
Thanks for this...
And of course my standart question, they are chances for next chapter of Crisis in this week or nexts?

Date: 2011-11-16 08:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Thanks, Maddie - glad you liked it!

There's no chance for a Crisis update until well into December or even January, I'm afraid. But you know I always to a 5-chapter stretch on that one, so it'll be well worth the wait! :)

Date: 2011-11-16 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tadashee.livejournal.com
hahaha. pretty sure oliver was just delirious and forgot he was proposing! wowww! aww. this was adorable. i cant wait to read the next story!

Date: 2011-11-16 05:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Thanks, Tadashee! I know I'm supposed to be sticking to my fic schedule, but this series just won't leave me alone, LOL! :-)

Glad you like it, babes.

Date: 2011-11-16 03:52 am (UTC)
ext_98692: (Chlollie F* the Comics Credit To: Geek_o)
From: [identity profile] aleja221.livejournal.com
Great chap. I esp. liked the proposal.

Date: 2011-11-16 08:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Totally unconventional, and therefore perfect for them. ;)

Glad you liked it, and thanks for commenting! :)

Date: 2011-11-16 03:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renka23.livejournal.com
Whoa. Whoa! Twist.

Totally not expecting that! But what a nice surprise! That was totally adorable. Can't wait for the next part. so stoked! :D

Date: 2011-11-16 05:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Whoa. Whoa! Twist."

We like Twists. ;-)

And Chlollie thrives on the unexpected. It's what makes them so awesome! :-D

Thanks for commenting, Karen! *hugs*

Date: 2011-11-16 04:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iluvaqt.livejournal.com
hehe that was the most unexpected proposal ever but it fit. When she prodded him out of drowsiness with uncertainty, I half expected him to fully wake flustered protesting that it was the wrong box, not that he wasn't wanting to give it to her or that he wasn't planning to ask just not quite yet... and produce the earrings she anticipated... But now I'm theorizing while he is tired, he planned to prompt pass out after handing her the rings so that she would have time to process without any pressure from him, or having to look in his eyes.. :D

Date: 2011-11-16 05:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"hehe that was the most unexpected proposal ever but it fit. When she prodded him out of drowsiness with uncertainty, I half expected him to fully wake flustered protesting that it was the wrong box, not that he wasn't wanting to give it to her or that he wasn't planning to ask just not quite yet... and produce the earrings she anticipated..."

How do you know that's not what's gonna happen, hmm? Pace yourself, Kimmy! :-D

"But now I'm theorizing while he is tired, he planned to prompt pass out after handing her the rings so that she would have time to process without any pressure from him, or having to look in his eyes.. :D"

Well, your well on the way with your theorising, babes. I'll say that without giving too much of Living Life away. ;-)

So glad you liked it!
Edited Date: 2011-11-16 05:33 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-11-16 05:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
BWA HAHAHAHAHAHHA!

I've had such a long day... that proposal has me in freakin stitches right now. Seriously Dee, do you check my schedule and plan these things when I need a laugh the most? Because I swear, you always come through!

It's oddly casual, sure, but in a way, so perfect, and I can actually see it happening.

*hugs you* You're the best Dee, thanks so much for posting this now!!

Date: 2011-11-16 08:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
So glad I always manage to brighten your day!!! :-D *uses sunny!Chlollie icon*

A very unexpected and unconventional proposal, true - but very Chlollie-like (and a hundred times better than skipping it entirely and going straight into a wedding that neither of them can remember, LOL!!!) :-D

I'm sure they'll have lots to say about it in the morning, though. ;)

So glad you liked it, Sera! And happy to make you smile. :) *hugs*
Edited Date: 2011-11-16 05:34 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-11-16 06:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] watcharrow.livejournal.com
omg that was great... i did not expect the proposal either but it was nice and cute and yeah they dont do conventional things and it works for them... thanks for this lovely chapter and now i cant wait to read the next chapter 'Living Life'.. once again congrats bravo !

Date: 2011-11-16 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"omg that was great... i did not expect the proposal either but it was nice and cute and yeah they dont do conventional things and it works for them..."

My watchword for Chlollie is Expect the Unexpected! LOL! :-)

"thanks for this lovely chapter and now i cant wait to read the next chapter 'Living Life'.. once again congrats bravo !"

Thank you! The Good News is that I've already started writing it. (YAY!) The Not-so-Good News is that I must focus on my Big Bang for the next few weeks, which must be complete by 9th December, so I have to pause on this one for a while. But I'll come back to it soon, I promise!

So glad you liked it!

*hugs*

Date: 2011-11-16 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] watcharrow.livejournal.com
yeeeeeeeeeessssss cant wait to read it... im toot excited about it...read u soon... *hugs* bravo for your great work oh u're right about them 'Expect the Unexpected' yeah

Date: 2011-11-16 07:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ica013.livejournal.com
Hahaha - you don't get much more of a low key proposal than that!. Love that you are going to continue the series

Date: 2011-11-16 05:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
I love this series, and it just keeps on growing. It was initially meant to have just 3 parts, then it morphed into 5, then 7, and now it's at 10. So there's at least 3 more parts to enjoy in the future! :-)

Thanks for the lovely comments, and the recommendations! I really appreciate it. *hugs* :-)
Edited Date: 2011-11-16 06:09 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-11-16 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chlollifan84.livejournal.com
Oh my god!! They're engaged! This is sooooo good!
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
This one made my day better!!

Date: 2011-11-16 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Oh my god!! They're engaged! This is sooooo good!
"


*nods* Yep, they are, and I'm glad you think so! :-D

Happy to brighten your day, babes. Thanks so much for your lovely comments! :-) *hugs*
Edited Date: 2011-11-16 06:09 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-11-16 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pompeypearly-v2.livejournal.com
Twist!

I didn't expect that while reading these last few chapters. But a Chlollie engagement is never a bad thing - shame we didn't really get to see much on SV!

Looking forward to the next installment.

x

Date: 2011-11-16 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Twist!"

I've moved on from Evil Cliffies to Unexpected Twists, LOL! :-D

"I didn't expect that while reading these last few chapters. But a Chlollie engagement is never a bad thing - shame we didn't really get to see much on SV!"

Oh, don't get me started on how much they robbed us. I'll be here all day!

"Looking forward to the next installment."

Workin' on it, and thanks so much for commenting! :-)

Date: 2011-11-16 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saurina.livejournal.com
OMG you're so wicked Dee, I love this turn of event. Ha ha Oliver proposed while sleeping!! I laughed so much when he began with the whole yada yada speech LOL!! And now they are engaged, you're the best Dee, thanks for another wonderful story in this epic series of yours..;))))))

Date: 2011-11-16 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"OMG you're so wicked Dee..."

I'm such a tease, LOL!!! :-D

"Ha ha Oliver proposed while sleeping!! I laughed so much when he began with the whole yada yada speech LOL!! And now they are engaged, you're the best Dee, thanks for another wonderful story in this epic series of yours..;))))))"

It's my pleasure, babes. I love to write them, and I love that you love to read them!

*cuddles* :-)

Date: 2011-11-16 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] patie91.livejournal.com
First: the continuing repetition of the 'I love you's' is so sweet.

I've read this with a smile on my face and the conviction that what you wrote is so right. The proposal was pretty surprising and unusual in its casualness. But it was pretty sweet,too. Oliver, half-asleep, with all the cliches, overused, but nevertheless true in their case.

Finally, now Oliver believes Chloe won't freak out, leave him, run away, be scared of being with him in every way possible. We've seen how Chloe has come to believe completely in theie relationship and love. I am happy to see that now Oliver believes that Chloe does, too. It makes the proposal right. And it is nice to know Oliver bought the rings with the intention of saying he loves Chloe, and how much she means to him. And what a surprise he got when unexpected declarations of love on the phone foiled his plan!

I'm not surprised Chloe wondered for a moment if such a big commitment was right at the time. Just because she is all in, doesn't mean she won't be shocked in such an important moment in her life. And it was so quick after the 'I love you's.'

Still, I wish I could see the morning after, or the afternoon after. When Ollie wakes up to the sight of Chloe with three rings on her finger (Possessive Ollie, anyone?). When he remembers asking the question and Chloe's answer. She was like:“Uh – yeah, sure.” And I was like:“Uh – yeah, sure! She'll marry him.”

I've come to love the way the show dealt with Chloe and Oliver's marriage, though there was too little of them shown.
But you got Chloe and Oliver an unusual engagement with rings (a great idea, unexpected, but very much Oliver). And I loved it.
Waiting for 'Living Life'. I've got a feeling 'Life isn't too strong' for Chloe and Oliver.

Date: 2011-11-24 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Another kick-ass comment for me to sink my teeth into!!! *squees*

Again, I plead for time, but I will come and reply in detail. Many thanks, I'm so pleased you like it! :-)

Date: 2011-11-16 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] danisige.livejournal.com
Hot, sweet and great.:D

Oliver's surprise was the marriage proposal and the ring ... I loved it. And Chloe was completely in love, even more if this is possible lol and Oliver was so happy and confident of their relationship.:D

I loved the end and the story as always is amazing.

Date: 2011-11-24 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"Hot, sweet and great.:D

Thank you, thank you, thank you! :-D

"Oliver's surprise was the marriage proposal and the ring ... I loved it. And Chloe was completely in love, even more if this is possible lol and Oliver was so happy and confident of their relationship.:D

I loved the end and the story as always is amazing."


Aw, thanks for your lovely comments, Dani! *cuddles* :-)

Date: 2011-11-16 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paolamhc.livejournal.com
I have to say that is the most original proposal I've read in a long time. Loved the story and can;t wait to read the continuation.

Date: 2011-11-24 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"I have to say that is the most original proposal I've read in a long time."

OMG SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! :-D

"Loved the story and can;t wait to read the continuation."

Thank you so much, Paola! I hope to continue sometime in early December.

Glad you liked it! *hugs*

Date: 2011-11-17 12:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greenteam4ever.livejournal.com
LoL That was the cutest proposal ever!))Really! <3
I wanna see them in the morning already! Hope you'll go on with this lovely series ;)

Date: 2011-11-24 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"LoL That was the cutest proposal ever!))Really! <3"

LOL, very Chlollie-like! :-D

"I wanna see them in the morning already! Hope you'll go on with this lovely series ;)"

Oh, of course I will. Trust me! ;-)

So glad you liked, it, bebe!!! *hugs*

Date: 2011-11-18 12:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternal-moonie.livejournal.com
*CUDDLES YOU*

absolutely LOVE this installment from the very start to the end! Can't wait for the next one hon!

Date: 2011-11-18 06:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Thanks so much, Jan! :)

Date: 2011-11-23 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chlollie-4ever.livejournal.com
JESUS!!!!!! This was the most amazing marriage purpose EVER!!!! So Chlollie... you absolutely ROCKED!!!!

Can't wait for more....

Date: 2011-11-24 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
So glad you liked it, Sofia, and your icon is made of WIN!!! :-D

Date: 2011-12-10 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyizi.livejournal.com
*dies laughing* Oliver just made the best-worst proposal of all time! So much for the smooth, charming billionaire! Best. Proposal. Ever. I ♥ you for this! :p

Date: 2012-04-16 09:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
"*dies laughing* Oliver just made the best-worst proposal of all time! So much for the smooth, charming billionaire! Best. Proposal. Ever. I ♥ you for this! :p"

Love you too, bebe! Sorry I'm just getting around to this comment!

Oliver's proposal was made of win, wasn't it? But never fear: He does it all again properly in the morning, down on one knee, and all!!!

Thanks for the comment, and I hope you're doing okay! :-) *huggles*
Edited Date: 2012-04-16 09:51 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-05-03 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyizi.livejournal.com
No worries, that's me just back after (another) laptop disaster and I cannot WAIT to get back into this! I have a feeling that I will be starting from the beginning again. Oh. What a hardship... :p

(and *squee* for another proposal!)

Date: 2012-05-03 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Another laptop disaster?!? Oh, no! *smishy cuddles*

I hope you get a good one soon, this can't be nice for you at all!

"I have a feeling that I will be starting from the beginning again. Oh. What a hardship... :p"

LULZ!!!! :-D

Good to hear from you, babes! :-)

Date: 2012-05-03 11:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyizi.livejournal.com
yup, another one. I have to be honest and admit that this one was TOTALLY my fault, though :(

I have an awesome replacement now and here's hoping it does not need to be replaced for a LONG time :)

Looking forward to reading this whilst I'm meant to be working tomorrow :p

Date: 2012-05-03 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babydee1.livejournal.com
Enjoy, my dear - enjoy. After countless months with a dodgy computer, you've more than earned it! ;-)
Edited Date: 2012-05-03 11:24 pm (UTC)

Date: 2013-11-13 07:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] malugargula.livejournal.com
So amazing So romantic
Even sleeping Ollie rocks Chloe's world :)
And I liked Kareena a lot

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