"First, that was really perfect. The way Oliver tended to her was both hot and tender: being gentle with her, but lifting her on the counter, and stroking her cheek. And when he told her to hold on to him?--That was sweet."
Thank you! I refuse to believe that Oliver Queen packed a bleeding woman off home without tending to her wounds first. This is just a deleted scene, as far as I'm concerned. ;-)
"And this: He folded his arms and looked at her sternly. “Are you going to take off that shirt, or am I going to have to do it for you?” That was great!"
Hee! Injured or no, if I were Chloe my response would have been, 'Baby, you can undress me anytime!' *wink-wink!*
"Second, I loved their reactions to each other, and I'm so thankful both noticed. Should be interesting to see what happens in the next chapter."
More than just interesting, if I have my way with them! :-P
"And third: that cliffhanger?--Evil. Pure, evil."
Why, thanks! I take that as a compliment - I'm very proud of my Evil Cliffies!!!
"Love your Chlollie stories, can't wait for more =)"
It's a pleasure writing them, and an even greater pleasure getting all your lovely feedback! :-D
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Date: 2010-01-27 07:41 pm (UTC)Thank you! I refuse to believe that Oliver Queen packed a bleeding woman off home without tending to her wounds first. This is just a deleted scene, as far as I'm concerned. ;-)
"And this: He folded his arms and looked at her sternly. “Are you going to take off that shirt, or am I going to have to do it for you?” That was great!"
Hee! Injured or no, if I were Chloe my response would have been, 'Baby, you can undress me anytime!' *wink-wink!*
"Second, I loved their reactions to each other, and I'm so thankful both noticed. Should be interesting to see what happens in the next chapter."
More than just interesting, if I have my way with them! :-P
"And third: that cliffhanger?--Evil. Pure, evil."
Why, thanks! I take that as a compliment - I'm very proud of my Evil Cliffies!!!
"Love your Chlollie stories, can't wait for more =)"
It's a pleasure writing them, and an even greater pleasure getting all your lovely feedback! :-D