Whee, finally I get a chance to read this!! And the best part is, I get to read three whole chappies at once. I'll have to leave town more often, if this is the reward I get for it. *g*
Great choice to make this first-person, Dee. Your Clark voice is so spot-on; he's dorky and sweet and totally clueless, bless his pointed little alien heart.
And that had involved insulting my mother, verbally demeaning my best friend Chloe, physically assaulting Lex and abducting the pregnant bride-to-be.
Yeah, not my finest hour.
BWAH! I can just imagine Clark saying this to himself while moping around in his barn loft, tossing balls to Shelby. Good thing Chloe turned up to get him out of his (tortoise) shell. And I'm sure that Martha said exactly what you wrote to him offscreen. *Nods firmly*
“Clark, I already know your secret, so it’s not like there’s much left to hide.”
Ha. That’s what she thought.
Heeeee! When it comes to repression, Chloe and Clark are quite the pot and the kettle, aren't they? I can hardly wait to see Clark give her some of her own medicine. :D
That secret handshake is so *them*, too. They're best friends, after all. They share everything, including a reluctance to own up to the fact that maybe they're closer to each other than they'd like to believe. I can hardly wait to see them open each other's eyes...
If she decided to get personal, then so would I. Knowing Chloe, once I started asking searching questions, she’d back off, sooner or later.
And if she didn’t…well, then I’d finally get to see what really made her tick.
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Date: 2009-09-06 08:46 pm (UTC)Great choice to make this first-person, Dee. Your Clark voice is so spot-on; he's dorky and sweet and totally clueless, bless his pointed little alien heart.
And that had involved insulting my mother, verbally demeaning my best friend Chloe, physically assaulting Lex and abducting the pregnant bride-to-be.
Yeah, not my finest hour.
BWAH! I can just imagine Clark saying this to himself while moping around in his barn loft, tossing balls to Shelby. Good thing Chloe turned up to get him out of his (tortoise) shell. And I'm sure that Martha said exactly what you wrote to him offscreen. *Nods firmly*
“Clark, I already know your secret, so it’s not like there’s much left to hide.”
Ha. That’s what she thought.
Heeeee! When it comes to repression, Chloe and Clark are quite the pot and the kettle, aren't they? I can hardly wait to see Clark give her some of her own medicine. :D
That secret handshake is so *them*, too. They're best friends, after all. They share everything, including a reluctance to own up to the fact that maybe they're closer to each other than they'd like to believe. I can hardly wait to see them open each other's eyes...
If she decided to get personal, then so would I. Knowing Chloe, once I started asking searching questions, she’d back off, sooner or later.
And if she didn’t…well, then I’d finally get to see what really made her tick.
Bring it, Clark!! *Runs to next chapter*