ext_35016 ([identity profile] slytherinpunk.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] babydee1 2010-02-27 01:16 am (UTC)

I'm trying to think where to begin, there was so much I loved about this chapter.

Even though before I commented saying I wanted Ollie to hurt as much as Chloe did, I didn't realize that in getting what I wanted, I would be a masochist, lol. Because his emotions had me distraught and pinning and feeling the loss of something real.

I loved how you said he would have broken something in the apartment if there was anything left to break, because before reading that, while I was reading his emotional struggle with watching her go, I was like: "He'd break something after she left if Dinah hadn't already broken everything earlier..."

Lol--we're so in sync darling =)

And I LOVED how you had Ollie suspicious that Clark was trying to force Dinah on as Oliver's new blond sidekick--lol! Just genius! I love your work, I can't wait to read all this again! And I definitely can't wait for the next book! ♥

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