First, that was really perfect. The way Oliver tended to her was both hot and tender: being gentle with her, but lifting her on the counter, and stroking her cheek. And when he told her to hold on to him?--That was sweet. And this: He folded his arms and looked at her sternly. “Are you going to take off that shirt, or am I going to have to do it for you?” That was great!
Second, I loved their reactions to each other, and I'm so thankful both noticed. Should be interesting to see what happens in the next chapter.
And third: that cliffhanger?--Evil. Pure, evil.
Love your Chlollie stories, can't wait for more =)
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Date: 2010-01-16 07:27 pm (UTC)Second, I loved their reactions to each other, and I'm so thankful both noticed. Should be interesting to see what happens in the next chapter.
And third: that cliffhanger?--Evil. Pure, evil.
Love your Chlollie stories, can't wait for more =)